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intro need's work,..sound's chozen are rubish imo,..you've got the shit flowin better but you need some grit soundin sound's,..stay away from the happy sound's,..they take away from the edge that your track is obviously supposed to have,..the main rubish sound start's at>1:29,..it is edgy,... and does work,.. but it aint got enough grit imo,..i want you to perfect this shit for tune of month,..so must point out the poo,...there it is again at>4:36 for example,...im not just dissin your track,..hope you don't feel that way bout this review,..just feel you've managed to get a solid foundation together but it need's more grit to get thing's fartn,...full on chunk is what this need's,..that bein the grit sound's,..keep at it man,..youve got a phat layout crankin,..cheers... 
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intro need's work,..sound's chozen are rubish imo,..you've got the shit flowin better but you need some grit soundin sound's,..stay away from the happy sound's,..they take away from the edge that your track is obviously supposed to have,..the main rubish sound start's at>1:29,..it is edgy,... and does work,.. but it aint got enough grit imo,..i want you to perfect this shit for tune of month,..so must point out the poo,...there it is again at>4:36 for example,...im not just dissin your track,..hope you don't feel that way bout this review,..just feel you've managed to get a solid foundation together but it need's more grit to get thing's fartn,...full on chunk is what this need's,..that bein the grit sound's,..keep at it man,..youve got a phat layout crankin,..cheers...
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(as i reply i say this outloud, doing an almost pefect bert&earny impression)
(bert: ) Sunuvubeitch, weres my gun!?
(earny: ) Over here burt, right by the crack.
but on a serious note: what to do mean by grit?
You want all of the sounds to sound more growl and harshness?
happey sounds ey??...
im on the verge of sequencing and order of amps and flangers here...
dont make me do it!...
anyone else have any comments?
after equipped's ideaz im on the verge of going noise / industrial on v1.2
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Hidden identity: 20-11-2005 07:33.
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awe man your not mad are ya?? i'll explane what the grit mean's if you really want know,...just tyin to be helpfull,..really,.. 
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20-11-2005 08:59 |
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awe man your not mad are ya?? i'll explane what the grit mean's if you really want know,...just tyin to be helpfull,..really,..
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your never in the chat room??
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20-11-2005 09:01 |
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Seriously only tyrin to be helpfull with that review,...if you take a huge break from you tunes you will get an outsiders perspective,...this is a great tecnique i try n use,...with my latest tune i posted was way too early and ass a result i didn't truly get the shit flowin,...put the tune away for a week and then chop the shit out of it,...when your ready,...great strategy,...and carry around a dicktaphone for them quik ideas,...cheers.. 
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20-11-2005 09:12 |
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you got some sick beats in this,....im not no master but i truly feel that this need's some work,... there's so many thing's to yip about that i don't see it possible to get it all across in a review,..or im to tired but if you really want the serious indepth feedback send a pm and ill hit you back,..cheers hidden...
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20-11-2005 09:25 |
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awe man your not mad are ya?? i'll explane what the grit mean's if you really want know,...just tyin to be helpfull,..really,..
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LO, i wasnt mad i was tryin to be funny!
Didnt u ever see sesame street before?
its like a little kids show, and i do imitations of the puppet guys,
and talk like im shit off of the street, it was just a joke.
And yes your right about taking breaks form your songs so that you can get a fresh prespective.
If i sit to long listening to the same ol song it gets burnt into my brain and i cant realy take it the right way anymore when i hear it.
But i didnt work THAT long on this song,
and i was acutaly planning on replaceing the trance synth sounds with something more heavy if some1 else here agreed that it should be done.
If i was mad id probably say so and express myself and then it would be over and i wouldnt be mad, and like hell id ever hate anyone at the whole forum 
peace homiez.
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20-11-2005 09:40 |
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It certainly has improved since last time, it was cool then and it is cooler now. I agree about the sounds though, I think some of them are too nice as well. But know this is a matter of personal taste, it doesn't necessarily mean gritty/dirty/hard/evil-sounding stuff are of a better quality. Drums are very cool here,except for the bongo-drums in the middle of the tune, they sound a bit plastic to me.
Nice work, keep at it.
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21-11-2005 19:28 |
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darkstar7
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I was listening 2 ya track and close to the end u lost the intrest of the feel u started at the start. What are u producing ur tracks with? some of the sounds are dark the happy so happy. Iam going to listen 2 it again.AWIGHT?
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