drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » My DnB songs My DnB songs Author Post Mythix Tourist Registration Date: 17-12-2004 Posts: 22 Here are one of my first attempts of making DnB, the first one is a full song, the second one is a start of a new song and sounds a lot better i think pls give some feedback! thnx http://musicminded.entity-project.be/DnB4.mp3 http://musicminded.entity-project.be/DnB7.mp3 15-11-2005 23:15 Greyone Master Producer Registration Date: 01-04-2005 Posts: 6,285 Helpfulness rating:  ok mythix , ill only check the first one. intro: hmmm , starts simple ... ok check this: snare is too metalic , layer it or take another one , must be fuller . kick must be phatter too (fruity blood overdrive , or another sample , or layer) ghostkicks...not done , choose for ghostsnares imo. hats are a bit static , invole more hats , rides , ... sub is nice but shouldnt be over the whole track. reece is cool , but its to repetative + eq it & fatten up the low frequenties to let it sound more full. good for a beginner , i now i made music like that too. the melody is kinda cool , but repetative too , change up some more 6:12 that bassmelody is nice , just eq alot more , work on your structure , intro , buildup , drop , breakdown/up , drop , breakdown , outro.. and ...practise a lot. I did all that stuff too. good luck mythix 16-11-2005 00:27 Mythix Tourist Registration Date: 17-12-2004 Posts: 22 DnB7.mp3 is now updated, thanks for the reply Greyone but i don't know what you mean by all those terms but check the update, there still something wrong with the bassline i think 16-11-2005 19:32 Muad'Dib Andrejnalin Registration Date: 02-12-2003 Posts: 4,197 Helpfulness rating:  Moved __ Thinking about becoming an Image-Line/FL Studio customer? Want a 10% reduction in price? Use this affiliate link: http://affiliate.image-line.com/BADEBDG473 There is no such thing without its opposite -Bene Gesserit 02-12-2005 14:39 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » My DnB songs