Please check out my new track 'Schizo' and post your comments here!!!
Another atempt at a metalheadz kind of track..
im not too fond of the intro caues ive kind of forced it in to get a feel for how im gonna really appraoch it... but its deff my finest mixdown to date...
takea listen... and you metalheadz fans should be pleased...
jsut a preview... :-p i go through so many ahaha...
Nice one. Can't put my finger on anything, but this default fruity pad sample (you know what I'm
talking about) should be really replaced by some other sound. This one is definetly the best-sounding
track of all that you've uploaded.
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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
Nice one. Can't put my finger on anything, but this default fruity pad sample (you know what I'm
talking about) should be really replaced by some other sound. This one is definetly the best-sounding
track of all that you've uploaded.
lol i knwo right that pad sucks... again pretty much just through the intro and stuff together just to get a feel for it...theinto may be completely different i have no idea ya know...
Nice eery stepping intro, instantly sounds dark.....
feelin the echo on the intro drums...i expected the drop to build up a bit more, maybe a bit longer without drums.
Lovin the off beat drum loop and the suble amens dropped in.
The bassline is pure dirt.
The only thing i would say about this track is the echoing synth is a bit soft, doesnt really fill the tune out, makes it sound a bit empty.
Overall feelin the track tho man, heavy heavy tune
Peace
Originally posted by thefunke1
For sure one of you best sounding tracks to date. Intro could use a little work as drum hits are a little dry, but as you said, still working on that.
Great bass on the drop, nice full sound, and drum levels work very well, nice clean sound.
Very nice track, great quality on the overall sound. Look forward to hearing the finished version.
cheers for the comments again... um.. ive almost gotten to the point with this track where i have to force everything in other than the drop...so im going to completely scrap the intro and just put it down for a while.. ive already sarted a new tune and its almost half done... just happened to be one of those ones that just flow... so schizo is gonna be put down for the time being.. and new one willl be up in the next couple weeks or so... ive had a lot more time on my hands since ive pretty much lost one of my jobs soooo... im broke and have time to make music... dont knwo if thats a good or a bad thing... but wathever...
Random noises at the begining, cool. The ambience is cool. I dont like the hi-hat sounds or the timbale either. Just sound a little dull. The synths and SFX are cool though. Not to sure about the choppy synth line in the drop, but it sounds good in the main section. Its got a nice evil vibe to it. The bass sound is nice but isnt all that clear. I think it could use a little more presence. There is also a cymbal which sounds a bit too loud. Im likeing the drums, some of the kicks sound a bit too woofy and choke the mix a bit, probably why the bass synth isnt all that clear. I hope your gonna do more with the drums, the edits are good but I think this would sound cool if it gets crazier as the tune progresses. I dont think you should lose the intro, there are a couple elements I dont like but it works nicely, I think just a little refinement would sort it out. You should carry on with this, is pretty cool so far.
ok i cant do a huge review i aint got long but anyways,
intro is very eery & very clean likin it,
all the levels sound well done nice n tight
drop is cool but it needs a bit of variation to make the listener more entranced but its only 3mins
Dam heavy preview man,..kick is a bit hard soundin at the intro,. fit's right in with the level's at the drop though,..maybe make it softer when it's kickin on it's own,...nice bunch of sound's,..all work,..totally has that metalheadz sound,...
...and god dam your distorted bass is solid,..do you layer an undistorted kick under there and what do you distort to get that chunk,..my latest track has a thumpin dist bass which was a result off tryin to get exactly what you have hear but as you will be able to tell if you hear it i came no whear near,..anyway this is a solid preview man,..gonna be huge...
Originally posted by equipped
Dam heavy preview man,..kick is a bit hard soundin at the intro,. fit's right in with the level's at the drop though,..maybe make it softer when it's kickin on it's own,...nice bunch of sound's,..all work,..totally has that metalheadz sound,...
...and god dam your distorted bass is solid,..do you layer an undistorted kick under there and what do you distort to get that chunk,..my latest track has a thumpin dist bass which was a result off tryin to get exactly what you have hear but as you will be able to tell if you hear it i came no whear near,..anyway this is a solid preview man,..gonna be huge...
nah just a sub and bass sample...but i have some lil tricks i leanred from a few big boys i talk to online
the fuck is that in the intro ?
ok hat/snare tab is to minimalistic n simple , pads too, seems like you just filled the space.
drums: kick is overpowering , snares a bit metalic imo ,...
distorted synths coming in , kinda overlapping but it doesnt sound bad.
Sub is great (n kinda distorted too)
cowbell in ya drums are nice , i have to use these too sometimes.
overall , i'm missing a main bass line , all i hear is like a reece here , a bass there , its cool but , its like there no real drop.
Originally posted by greyone
the fuck is that in the intro ?
ok hat/snare tab is to minimalistic n simple , pads too, seems like you just filled the space.
drums: kick is overpowering , snares a bit metalic imo ,...
distorted synths coming in , kinda overlapping but it doesnt sound bad.
Sub is great (n kinda distorted too)
cowbell in ya drums are nice , i have to use these too sometimes.
overall , i'm missing a main bass line , all i hear is like a reece here , a bass there , its cool but , its like there no real drop.
should work good on this one.
was stupid to waste your breath about the intro since it was much stated above that it was shotty and thrown togetherfor the sake of the site...
drums are the way they should be...
theres no reece only 2 bass samples and a sub...
so wahtever you say man... but again.. you dont really have a clue what youre talking about so...
Kick is a little overpowering on the intro, But sounds not too bad when the bassline powers home. The drum programming keeps the beat interesting as wel.
Bassline is phat dude, i like the compression and overdrive u got on it. The dark synths do compliment the track nicely as well.
Not much i can say in the way of constructive crit dude, it seems ur well on the way with this track anyway and u know where ur taking it.
Originally posted by greyone
the fuck is that in the intro ?
ok hat/snare tab is to minimalistic n simple , pads too, seems like you just filled the space.
drums: kick is overpowering , snares a bit metalic imo ,...
distorted synths coming in , kinda overlapping but it doesnt sound bad.
Sub is great (n kinda distorted too)
cowbell in ya drums are nice , i have to use these too sometimes.
overall , i'm missing a main bass line , all i hear is like a reece here , a bass there , its cool but , its like there no real drop.
should work good on this one.
was stupid to waste your breath about the intro since it was much stated above that it was shotty and thrown togetherfor the sake of the site...
drums are the way they should be...
theres no reece only 2 bass samples and a sub...
so wahtever you say man... but again.. you dont really have a clue what youre talking about so...
Yeah your right. Greyone doesnt actually know his own opinions does he. I mean who is he to give you a bad review??!! Lets hope he doest waste his breath and review your tunes again huh? Seemed pretty pointless to leave any reveiw what-so-ever didnt it. I mean what is the point in posting a track when somebody posting their opinions on it is simply told that he doesnt know what he is talking about. Heres an idea.... Next time you post a tune, where your allowed to write a little info about it try this instead..
Here is my new tune........... Listen here if you like, I couldnt care less about your opinions because you all know nothing. This and every other tune of mine is perfect in each and every way. If you disagree then your an idiot. As i said before if you dont like then your wrong, otherwise, click reply and start bowing in honour of my greatness.. Anthing less is wrong and you should be punished for you stupidity.
Originally posted by greyone
the fuck is that in the intro ?
ok hat/snare tab is to minimalistic n simple , pads too, seems like you just filled the space.
drums: kick is overpowering , snares a bit metalic imo ,...
distorted synths coming in , kinda overlapping but it doesnt sound bad.
Sub is great (n kinda distorted too)
cowbell in ya drums are nice , i have to use these too sometimes.
overall , i'm missing a main bass line , all i hear is like a reece here , a bass there , its cool but , its like there no real drop.
should work good on this one.
was stupid to waste your breath about the intro since it was much stated above that it was shotty and thrown togetherfor the sake of the site...
drums are the way they should be...
theres no reece only 2 bass samples and a sub...
so wahtever you say man... but again.. you dont really have a clue what youre talking about so...
Yeah your right. Greyone doesnt actually know his own opinions does he. I mean who is he to give you a bad review??!! Lets hope he doest waste his breath and review your tunes again huh? Seemed pretty pointless to leave any reveiw what-so-ever didnt it. I mean what is the point in posting a track when somebody posting their opinions on it is simply told that he doesnt know what he is talking about. Heres an idea.... Next time you post a tune, where your allowed to write a little info about it try this instead..
Here is my new tune........... Listen here if you like, I couldnt care less about your opinions because you all know nothing. This and every other tune of mine is perfect in each and every way. If you disagree then your an idiot. As i said before if you dont like then your wrong, otherwise, click reply and start bowing in honour of my greatness.. Anthing less is wrong and you should be punished for you stupidity.
Just an idea
what are you talking about lol?? youre fucking funny... jsut shut up.. go away lol.. opinons are fine man... but to me unles you have work to back your opinions they dont mean much to me... is it so bad that i voice that...if not... then.. go away...lol... jsut shut up..
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Surora23: 28-11-2005 19:19.
...and god dam your distorted bass is solid,..do you layer an undistorted kick under there and what do you distort to get that chunk,..my latest track has a thumpin dist bass which was a result off tryin to get exactly what you have hear but as you will be able to tell if you hear it i came no whear near,..anyway this is a solid preview man,..gonna be huge...
