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Dj Kemix 
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Please check out my new track 'Inside the Ride (ill:Tech)' and post your comments here!!!
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14-11-2005 13:01 |
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broadside
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listening . . .
bass line is great imo, got a good hook to it, but i think the drums could be even more punchy, particularly the snare.
nice basic raw vibe, do actually like where this one is coming from . . . dunno if the bass variations are really working for example at 2.00 minutes.
anyway thought the riff is sweet I'd say that the bass sound is a bit wrong, to ragged, it becomes to obvious when it stops for a second in the riff.
mid section done well. but when drop deserves more build. also personally not feeling the drum patterns afterwards, if they carry on too long that is . . . ah good, back into the groove.
anyway long story short, this is nice, but needs some cleaning up. noises like that at 4:44 for example dont really work. also doesnt have enough working variations to keep the interest for te entire lengthg.
Good work.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by broadside: 14-11-2005 17:11.
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14-11-2005 17:11 |
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Hidden identity
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i like ur synths this time around, their wack 
Also i liked the beats and drums during the first half alot more,
before the amen stuff.
broadside said:
"but i think the drums could be even more punchy"
in FL you can play 2 drum samples or slicers at the same time with a layer but then use volume envilopes on one of the drum samples or drum loops in the slicer to make the should realy short and sharp, if that is the kind of punch he was talkin about...
Man i hate to sound like a bitch but in the two songs of yours id heard, each time i fealt like the drums were a bit random with their patterns sorry.
So anyways did you wanna team up on a track sometime or do you just like to do your own thing?
Am rating this 5/10 because i feal like it needs more harmony and meldoy. again, i dont mean to sound like a bitch its just that...
well youll see what im talkin about if we ever team up on 1.
take cair, keep on flipin, cya!
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14-11-2005 18:25 |
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dYzeaZe
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The stucture is messy. Like the low sub sound alot. Hate the speech synthesizer, why do you have
to put it in every single tune?
The 3:12 - 3:16 drop doesn't sound at all and the thing afterwards is very disharmonic. Losing the
flow when the sliced amen break comes in. Very quality sounding tho.
Cheers.
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14-11-2005 18:42 |
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Dj Kemix
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Like Totaly Dudes!!!
I'm from California...............
Surfs Up Bro!!
Well I try! 
maybe the sun is getting to me out here?
Have a nice day fellahs and I'm always down to get me blaze remix fire!!!
Bring Da Fire!!!!
~I.T. Riddum Selektah!
Booooooo! 
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14-11-2005 19:59 |
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Twistedinc
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first thing that came to mind when the amen came in...1 bar amen with a delayed fade out. sound quaility is awsome, but the randomness should be left for the DJ at the tables IMHO not on the track it self.
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14-11-2005 20:08 |
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Dj Kemix
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yall should know I was just messin' around sunday evening and made this tune...prob like a good 6 hours.....that's why it lacks work....
Still, my style is progressing...layering subs under the bass tones now..it's alot more full-range that way hittin' all kinds of fequenciezz..
As far as lack of melody... 
lol!
sure uh huh.....whatever you say mate....
I might have been half awake when I made this because I have no time to produce any more unless I keep myself awake and without caffine or any other stimulant....So wait for a project I spend a good amount of time on...for now these are my experiments...Why do yall think I post trax....so I can keep learning to be a better smith with my craft....
So on this note I really appreciate your critiques!!! infact I love um'
Thanks for all those how take time to listen to other peoples material and reviewing it!
We are all one family, a drum n bass society!!!
look out for the remix on this one....
Ill:Tech
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14-11-2005 22:07 |
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Nosrac
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I wanted to check this one out but I only have my girlfriends mac right now (which she is always on) and my computer at work blocks forums. What form is this in?? If you get a chance email me a copy to the address under my profile. Thanks bro.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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15-11-2005 01:36 |
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thefunke1
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Cymbal in the intro needs a little something (right at the begining), sounds a little dry. hmm... drop kind of fades into the intro, mabey bring part of your ambinet breakdown (around 2:40 mark) to the begining, would make a more appealing intro. Like the sub bass used, although gets a little repetative as the tune continues.
Really like the sounds in the breakdown, nice old school sound, like a through back to the original Rave sound from the very early 90's.
Drums are nice, although would layer a few more hits over them to vary them up, and add a little more depth. (Eg. Cymbal hit at about 4:11)
Thanks
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15-11-2005 02:36 |
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Dj Kemix
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Can't thank you chaps enough!
Your support is a very big help!
A Big Up to
drumnbass.be crew inside!
~I.T.
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15-11-2005 09:55 |
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Dj Kemix
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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
"Hate the speech synthesizer, why do you have
to put it in every single tune?"
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To annoy you of course!
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15-11-2005 18:01 |
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equipped
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Level's sound great,..sound's are phat but the note's used on that main wobbly bass take away from everything,..your sound's and sample's are alway's top notch,..wobbly bass work's great with the synth at>2:40,..so maybe change up the notes when that synth isn't playin,..You've got some sick ideas and massive sound's,..just feel the notes on that bass could be changed up,..other than that this is a solid track man,..hope this was helpfull,..cheers.. 
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16-11-2005 06:47 |
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Dj Kemix
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Yes Indeed helpful...
I have to make shure
keys are transposed well.
Also watch out for synth-clutter as I call it.
Working on another project already...
It seems like my style is changing..
I don know...
All I know is that we need to use music.
~I.T.
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16-11-2005 09:31 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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THe drums sound very distant and have to much reverb on them. Sound like they're being played in the toilet.I can't really make the baseline out to well. The drums in the second half are pretty good, need a few adjustment though, to make them flow.
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