Rudeone
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Please check out my new track 'Nitrocell' and post your comments here!!!
Did this 4 months ago. it was the first one worth beeing published i think.
all sounds from reasons subtractor
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14-11-2005 09:30 |
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Surya 
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The bassline could defo use some distortion to get a warmer, fuller sound
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14-11-2005 10:11 |
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broadside
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worth being published? if your on that level, not probably a lot i can say that is gonna help you.
nothing against a trancey vibe per se, but i think the sounds at the start a bit over sweet if you know what i mean. though the tune is goodish.
maybe a small bit more reverb on the bass. but good vibe at points.
could do with more variation aswell.
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14-11-2005 17:16 |
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Rudeone
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not for a release of course but to put it on the internet i meant... sorry my english isnt the best
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14-11-2005 17:55 |
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dYzeaZe
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This one is VERY similar to the "Excuse Me" track that you've posted some time ago. Sweet.
I guess I got what I asked for 
(read here) ... or is it just a coincidence? 
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14-11-2005 18:12 |
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thefunke1
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Intro is nice, although sounds used are a little bright, lead synth needs some layering (to take off the edge a little from the sound).
Nice drop, really like the sub bass used. Nice overall ambient taste to the track, and has a great boucey feel to it.
This is a nice production, not huge on the choice of synth sounds used but that's just my own taste. The overall sounds do work well together, and the levels throughout are very clean and well balanced.
Look forward to hearing more.
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15-11-2005 01:24 |
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Force
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I like the feel of the choone, spacey, warm, and dreamie.
It floats along nicely.
Mellow choonage! nice going man.
Force DnB Source.
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15-11-2005 01:47 |
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Rudeone
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thanks for reviews everyone
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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
This one is VERY similar to the "Excuse Me" track that you've posted some time ago. Sweet.
I guess I got what I asked for
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as i made the excuse me after nitrocell it must be a coincidence 
my music got kind of this touch. i need to watch that my tracks do not sound the same though
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15-11-2005 11:05 |
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Rudeone
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Originally posted by Dj Kemix
This like crusing (driving) music dude....
Not dance music....
Way To repeditive...the drums do this the whole way through
1---2---3---4--- 1---2---3---4--- 1---2---3---4-- 1---2---3---4---
0 x.x...X...x... o.x.x...X...x.. x...x...0....x.. o.x.x...X...x..
0=kick o=snare x hi-hat X open hat.
this is your break the whole way through the song....
the main melody is just a loop did you make it yourself..
or is this a pre mad loop???
Bass is plain and weak...just a regular old sine wave....
Melodies and layers fit well together...
only drum changes ae a cymbal crash and a ride pattern...
your telling me my breaks are simple..this is one loop....
I created all my drumming beat by beat....
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yea thats true, drums are pretty weak and im not good in programmin drum lines nor equalizin or mastering bass and stuff.
thx for your opinion though
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01-12-2005 12:29 |
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Halph-Price
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aaaa rude, i listen to your stuff because although it is not great, it still has character. you may not rock at drums or mixing, but you're hearts in it. 
omg wtf is this garbage, naw kidding.
i like this song, who said it was suppose to be dance music. it's kinda trance influenced, or 'driving' music i guess. the bass is nice, with some big sub's i bet it would coe out good. it's not deep, but it's phat and punchy if you bitted up the volume on it a bit.
nice segways from sections of the songs, the delay you used on the last note to the quiet part, this song is very well done. wow, compared to the stuff you use to do, this is an improvement, you just need to keep up with doing drum programing to help give it that dnb feel more than trance.
it isn't anythig particularly amazing, but it could very well be sold for backgroundmusic dude. try to get some more song with varey flavours and you could get a demo album to sell yuor tunes for commercial shit, like presenations or games. even though it appears to most as a very minimalistic song, it's the perfect format to feature anything visual. it doesn't detract or go into big moments, theres a smooth transition, and you could probably loop this song easily. just some simple mixing or mastering and it would be good.
the drums may be a bit sharp, but for a place like dnb.be it's called for. still they punch through nicly.
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27-12-2005 19:41 |
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Rudeone
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thank you very much for your post. as im not too long in the buisness its good to hear people like the music even though the production isnt that well.
and i dont think my music will fit into background music in the near future as im tryin to make liquid dancefloor tunes. damn gotta get those drumlines working!!
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28-12-2005 08:42 |
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first off all sorry for the short review this kinda dnb ain't my style but i'll give a shot at reviewing anyway
i totaly follow surya's opinion on the bassline issue
try an distort it a bit (if u need a really good dist vst pm me
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the synths on the other hand sound to soft for me but do work for this kinda track , nice work on those
02.55====>03:40 this is taking to much time make it shorter
keep working @ it
the basics are there they just need some more entrainment
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28-12-2005 10:49 |
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DJ Hybrid K
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sounds good. im likin' the break, but...it needs more than just that one loop.
i think the bass loop is long enough that it doesnt get to boring...so props. i like the intro, specificly the hi-string. the chopped bass at the second drop is cool, but you use the same break again. work on your drums man. it takes time, bvut its worth it
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28-12-2005 17:01 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by Surya
The bassline could defo use some distortion to get a warmer, fuller sound |
do they distort regge dub basslines where you come from?
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Surya
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
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Originally posted by Surya
The bassline could defo use some distortion to get a warmer, fuller sound |
do they distort regge dub basslines where you come from? |
Well, I come from the DnB scene, where almost every bassline is distorted
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08-01-2006 10:32 |
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Rudeone
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distortion wouldnt really fit in this one i think
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08-01-2006 14:32 |
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Greyone
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nice n clean sounds , but its a bit too clean for my taste ... (style aint my genre either) but that doest take away this track got some nice vibes n soundquality in it.
maybe cut some of the high freq. off .
nice fx work inhere
maybe add some more Xiting buildups in
nothing more to remark
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08-01-2006 18:40 |
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Emblem-X
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this track has potential, the melodies make a sweet vibe. but the sounds of your synths sound somewhat too synthy, especially the high one sounds way too sharp. maybe layer and filter the whole bunch, add some reverb.
bassline needs some distortion to give it a warmer feel. the tune will sound a lot fuller than now.
beats are a bit simple but i think that's no problem here. but they do need variation.
overall not bad but this tune needs a lot more variation!
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