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EternalSoul
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Registration Date: 07-11-2005
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Usual d&b tune
long start (about 1 min) and the bassdrop.
Start also in Nintendo mode (as Tritar). the middle and the end of the tune is good! I like it
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08-11-2005 15:16 |
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aiku
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i like the beginning of song..
very soft and far or smthng
the moledy reminds me tv-game a lilbit but it's good..
bassdrop..
bass is over the drums..
too short imo.
7/10
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08-11-2005 15:56 |
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dYzeaZe
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Originally posted by aiku
too short imo. |
Isn't that what a preview supposed to be?
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08-11-2005 16:36 |
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f0re1gn
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08-11-2005 19:40 |
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Lightningflash
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I like the intro a lot.
The drum programming is good to, the saw tooth sound that appears immediately after the holler, I would be very tempted to produce a copy of it by ether sampling or use some spare oscillators and pitch modulate the copy very very slightly, keeping them both panned close together, you may already know what Im on about but I think that sound is very thin and a bit to shrill.
Have you thought of adding some restrained rhythms to the ambiance before the holler?
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08-11-2005 23:20 |
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Stutterstep
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wicked intro, great atmopheres
wicked sounds, the first synth i think is to loud and the second is to quiet.
drums need some work, just more punch to them and body, the pattern is good.
nice work
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08-11-2005 23:24 |
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Dj Kemix
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Like the bass riff...
killer!
nice breaks me like!
intro is tight!
Good drive...peace!
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09-11-2005 00:36 |
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equipped
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Your tunes hugely appretiated man,..track's a beast to be if not allready,..I would finish this shit,..intro is great,..could use a few more sample's maybe some vox vocal's or somethin at the intro,..other than that you got some sick idea's flowin with this,..bring this shit back to life,...cheers...
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09-11-2005 04:55 |
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equipped
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Originally posted by equipped
Your tunes hugely appretiated man,..track's a beast to be if not allready,..I would finish this shit,..intro is great,..could use a few more sample's maybe some vox vocal's or somethin at the intro,..other than that you got some sick idea's flowin with this,..bring this shit back to life,...cheers...
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Fuck i read your thread wrong,..you must have been wondering what the fuck i meant by you tune's hugely appretiated,..it is,. anyway i feel retarted so i had to straitn the shit out..cheers..
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09-11-2005 06:30 |
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Rudeone
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those pad melodies are well done but they could sound 'wider' imo. give 'em more headroom maybe. love the melodie that follows. hm crap... not feelin the mainpart at all, the bassmelodie and the sound of that high riff.
its your tune but i would try to fit the main to the intro a little bit at last
and redo the whole mainpart
very nice intro though m8
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09-11-2005 09:31 |
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dYzeaZe
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Fuck i read your thread wrong,..you must have been wondering what the fuck i meant by you tune's hugely appretiated,..it is,. anyway i feel retarted so i had to straitn the shit out..cheers.. |
No probs man! Cheers.
Thank you all for the nice feedback! Lovin' ya. I'll keep in mind everything you said.
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09-11-2005 14:50 |
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PassDa J.
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Long intro, not really my thing .. sounds are to 'happy' if you look at the whole song ..
Wow 1.30 sounds banging , cool sound. I'm waiting for a killer drop here, yeah pretty damn nice, drums should be a bit louder, maybe it was your intention .. yeah they surely need to be louder ..
Expecting a nice finished one
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09-11-2005 16:11 |
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cynik
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dark mysterious intro. nice!
cool bass teasers. not too fond of the game like melody of that synth in the intro
not the best drop but a wicked breakdown! well done, very nice.
the bass hits too loud. drums are progeammed well but could be a lot heavier for this style, theyre a bit moved away from the bassline.
low end needs more attention, eqing it would do. otherwise, very nice work, now go and finish it
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09-11-2005 19:03 |
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ZuBCoRe
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really kewl intro ... like the dark mood ...
midrange of the reece is too loud when it drops ... try a multibandcomp on the drums so the drums get louder and better compressed - should sound heavier ... try to compress the bass as well - root all basssounds to a fx group and compress em so they all got the same peak ... it's easier to mixdown with solid peaks on all fx *lol*
beats could be a lot heavier - too straight for dark sounds (imo) ...
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09-11-2005 23:05 |
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Muad'Dib
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Great intro, but it takes almost half a tune...?
Ok, I notice the breakdown at its end, so it must be another part...
Well, my voice is well pitched down, and NOT RECOGNIZABLE at all
But better like that than to be "I'll fuck you to death you stupid bitch"
Anyway, I don't like the snare - it is too quiet and weak. Add a little punch to it.
Nice aggressive style, I like those hats. And the reece is gr8!
You have some nice beats, and those kick loops have nice vibe...
Ends too abruptly, without any real clues that the breakdown will happen... but that's yer choice.
nice producin, and I hate it when the choon is not finished... but in any case you got 7/10 frm me
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11-11-2005 18:56 |
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Kid Prodigy
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Registration Date: 08-11-2005
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ayt ! i like your tunes theyv got alot in them, i could enjoy alot of your music!
the intro in this song: the idea is soo there but i think it maybe needs more aggression and a more memerable intro, to maximize the drop!
i like the bassline in this runs nicely, and of course the arp once again is nicely dropped in! likin this one carry it on! why not?
Kid Prodigy!!!! peace!!
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11-11-2005 20:40 |
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wreakon
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nice intro... but intros are easy
bass leading up to the drop is nasty!
drop isnt very heavy.. drums sound quite thin and ghost like. nothing really present in the mix after the drop
has potential though
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13-11-2005 16:43 |
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