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f0re1gn 
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Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Starts off very nicely with the bass, the hats and that piano-like thing, really feelin' it. Hats come in perfectly also, and the intro of the bigger bass is good too. Kicks are sounding good in the fade-in, the drop is good but lacks the whole dropness. The part that comes in makes me nod my head, good job! But the beat is in lack of some more hardness i think. And the fading snare could be changed to something, just imho though. Your sounds are fantastic together with the overall melody, editing, effects and structure though. And btw, this sounds more like Techno'n'bass or Trance'n'bass imo, the bass isn't quite the common one 
The fade-in after 3:10 is veryvery good, beats build up nicely, and the drop isn't all that droppy again. And is it me, or has nothing changed since the first drop? =/ Maybe i'm just deaf or something, but i'd prefer a track that changes (; Still got it's feel though, and not boring me at all!!!
I'm in love with your melodies, they really create some feelings and pictures in mind. :o Ending is interesting and quite intriguing. Good shit.
Overall, the track has perfect structure, effects, editing, sounds; but not so good beats and the thing after 3:40 when the second drop goes kind of disappointed me: i was waiting for something new to come and couldn't actually hear it -,-'
But i'm still your fan forever and you know that! 
And btw, you have much more agressive stuff than this from what i've seen and heard, so keep your tracks comin' and never quit music! Kthx.
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by f0re1gn: 30-10-2005 20:42.
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30-10-2005 20:37 |
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DJ HACKSAW
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Registration Date: 30-08-2005
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How many moths have you had. Just kidding
This song was very trancy.
Something i would turn down and fall alsleep to.
The whole song was not very complex.
Melodies were great.
Could be a little more da da dirty dirty but maybe thats me?
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31-10-2005 09:48 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
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puts people off around here.
intro is nintendo indeed, very casio. and the note changes are true to the 8bit genre.
drops expectedly, don't like the sound of the snare, it's got a very wooden feel, and the kick is weak as fuck. layer it!
bassline is well.. good for 93' trance
lead has got a few nice notes to it.. but sounds game again
not much good to say to this as it's not my field of play.. you wanted videogame, you got it..
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04-11-2005 20:05 |
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dYzeaZe
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Originally posted by cynik
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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
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puts people off around here.
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Haha I see I see 
And yep the beat pattern sucks big time.
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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04-11-2005 20:51 |
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broadside
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nice intro, i like the tune, but i think the new counter line at about :50 pushes it too far, makes it a bit too cheesy.
beat is nice, maybe be brought louder a touch, but nothing major, and the the bouncy bassline is a bit predictable
needs to go somewhere now . . .
sort of needs a section b mate, though i like the idea kind fo electro step, maybe needs a longer melody over the top, build up the complexity. though melody is definately the stronger point of this tune.
i think this has got a lot of potential as an intro, but it would be cool if it lead into something slightly more heavy at somepoint, but deffo a nice listen
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15-11-2005 19:40 |
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Rudeone
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really like the melody in the intro, gets too happy after a while i think but its still okay
uhm really like your style
you need to watch that your tunes doesnt get boring. i woulld have put in some harmonie change sometimes with a long deep pad maybe
this is 7/10
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16-11-2005 13:14 |
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TechDiff
Hetty Jakes Pretentious Cheese Wog
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Hey dude.I said Id reveiw your track, not sure if this is the one you meant though. I like the intro melodies, pads work real nicely too. Prehaps a few ambient hits and SFX would add a little more depth. I dont like the drums that much, the ride is cool, but the rest is pretty flappy. I like the reverberated arpegio synth. I used to do loads of tunes like this. I reakon this might sound better with synth drums rather than real hits, it would keep with the style more. I also think that itd be nice to put a reverb on one of the send channels and put the occasional note from the melody through it to add a little variation and depth. Prehaps some more harmonies too. Overall, I really like the melodies but I think the bass tone is a little too tacky but the actual notes work together nicely. The drums are week, try some synth drums and a fairly simple beat. A nice happy tune. Cool.
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16-11-2005 14:29 |
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additive
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you've chopped a loop without a groove.. the quality of the samples is very poor. the bass is a very plain sound and doesn't change at all. the lead synth is way electronica style and the melody gets boring.
I think you should change every sample and produce them up nicely, and put some swing or groove in the drums and loads of effects. I think you should make the bassline less robotic and have a mixture of long notes which are interesting, and short notes which are jumpy. the lead synth melody needs something to keep it interesting; maybe like some effects. it needs to move more.
cheers
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21-11-2005 10:57 |
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dYzeaZe
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Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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This tune is a completely unsuccessfull attempt @ drum'n'bass. I agree
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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21-11-2005 16:28 |
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