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kareem kareem is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Travel sick ' and post your comments here!!!
30-10-2005 18:15 Homepage of kareem
Sensa Sensa is a male
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drums soundin nice an tight on the intro
but the rest of it is a bit of a mess imo

theres no real build to the tune its all over the place

you should sit down and work on it more imo

you'll get there in the end
constructive critism mate Tongue
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30-10-2005 18:41 Homepage of Sensa
dYzeaZe dYzeaZe is a male
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Drums are good, lol you certainly do have some original way of sounding.
My ears fee strange tho.
Too disharmonical @ 1:50, ain't liking it. Hard to listen.
Good to hear normal sounds @ 2:34. Then weird stuff again.
I don't know what to say. Very hard to listen to.

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30-10-2005 19:41
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nice intro ,nice drums.
Like people said, gets a little crazy.
For the most part I liked it though.
Original bass, although it was very harsh and maybe too loud.
You hade nice fx but not enough of them.
Didnt like the metallic fadeout too much.
2nd half was pretty normal but maybe too repettitve(how do you spell that word)(repetetive)???
Overall nice sound quality.
Bigup

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31-10-2005 08:35
Uproot Uproot is a male
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Hey man, as already said, nice crisp soundin beat, and damn good instruments, some sounds i couldnt make for shit. It lacked structure, there were about 8 different bass lines and they were position quite randomly. If you get a square structure and pick the best bass line, try re-ordering it. Nice One
31-10-2005 11:38
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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theres a click there after, the bassline comes in.

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01-11-2005 16:31 Homepage of Halph-Price
Steyaert Steyaert is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Halph-Price
theres a click there after, the bassline comes in.


eh?

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01-11-2005 22:06 Homepage of Steyaert
Jeller Jeller is a male
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this is experimental dnb, i like it, its original

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06-11-2005 22:25
Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male
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bobp to this
kik a bit quirt in places
nice work mate

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