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BigFire 
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Wayfarer' and post your comments here!!!
Orguss 2 samps
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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27-10-2005 03:27 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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I guesse because I am the first I have to actually listen... 
The piano could use a little more reverb and EQ, the vocal is very silly, as the drop, but I liked the heavy sounds used in the intro before that except the space ship sound. The bass is nice but I think if you did a 25Hz cut to the lows of the entire track it might sound a little clearer! The synths stabs that were added in the second verse were very dope, but more of them would be nice and might make the track a bit more interesting to listen to. The laugh in the break is a little much for me, because it reminds me of a 14yrs old's humor. Maybe if you tryed a diff piano it might sound a little better or darker. Don't give up on it. 5/10 Z
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27-10-2005 05:27 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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Gets a bit monotonous for my liking, cool melodies though. The piano could have sounded better, sounds very general MIDI. Drums could need some variation. Sound is generally good. All in all a pretty cool track. Nice work.
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27-10-2005 13:20 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Intro and build up is good. The pad in the intro sounds nice but seems to be chopped off whenever a new chord is played.
Drum programming is good (love the hihat pattern!) but the drum sounds could be improved: the kick sounds a bit muddy, the snare is not powerful enough and the hihats could use some more sparkle.
The piano/clav sound is not up to scratch, it lacks depth and feel. I like the melody though, it reminds me a bit of medieval music and it surely is very original.
Try varying the note lengths of the melody that comes in at 1:06. The melody sounds a bit choppy because all notes are really short.
Nice ideas but needs more work.
edit: the sample is copyrighted, it comes from a movie called 'Orgus 2'. You may not upload tracks here that contain copyrighted samples so it has to go. Feel free to upload a version that does not contain copyrighted samples.
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