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26-10-2005 21:28 |
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dYzeaZe
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I like the intro very much. Sounding really experimental-like. Then it doesn't quite sound like anything (??) Plain beats, stuff's not really tied up together. It's not full ver, is it?
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26-10-2005 22:24 |
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Steyaert
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some real good elements in there. But yout production is worth shit. should put some kind of line into it. It sound like 7 different sounds mixed together very bad. I'ld suggest you keep all the pieces that you like (there are some really kick-ass moments) and then start building your track all over again.
If those beats are yours, then you deffinitly have the skillz to make this one massive.
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- dnb is all about intelligence... intelligence to seek out the music... go beyond the flow - as said by Invent
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27-10-2005 18:39 |
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baz
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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
I like the intro very much. Sounding really experimental-like. Then it doesn't quite sound like anything (??) Plain beats, stuff's not really tied up together. It's not full ver, is it? |
nope not full version but it's experimenting eh dunno if there wil ever be a full ver
thx for reviews peeps
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30-10-2005 14:47 |
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TechDiff
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Alright, dude. Hadnt seen any of your tunes in a while so I thought Id check this out. Drums are a little messy and sound like there peaking but some cool stuff going on.
Melodies are a bit erm.... experimental still, but thats cool. but there are some points where everything gets too messy. The bass end especially could do with a lot of tidying up because at the moment it just sounds like rumble and nothing else.. I like the vocal chopping and some of the drum fills are cool too. Sounds like youve been using the Fruity slicer and the snap point set to none to get those fast drill snares. You should try putting filter sweeps on those too. Full on 'pusher style. Every tune seems to get a little better but I still think you should try to carry a theme a little more. There are couple cool bits of melody which you should try to make more of a point out of, instead of just having them loop a couple times. I enjoy listening to your tracks because you clearly improve and try something new with each one. But in terms of musical content you need to work more on having something which will grab some attention. Otherwise I think you run the risk of having a tune which people will listen to once, say "right, thats mental", and never listen to it again. But if you maintain some sort of theme or variations on the same idea/melody, youll have something which will invite the listener to take a little more seriously and make a genuine decision on whether they like it or not. At the moment this tune sounds more like an experiment, rather than a piece of music. Even stuff like venetian snares and Doormouse has some sort of musical element to it, even if its more in the timbral sense. Its like the way that contemporary orchestral music is more about creating mood and texture than melodies, but it still remains musical. Try thinking about a mood or atmospere you want to create and go from there
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31-10-2005 16:21 |
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baz
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Originally posted by TechDiff
Alright, dude. Hadnt seen any of your tunes in a while so I thought Id check this out. Drums are a little messy and sound like there peaking but some cool stuff going on.
Melodies are a bit erm.... experimental still, but thats cool. but there are some points where everything gets too messy. The bass end especially could do with a lot of tidying up because at the moment it just sounds like rumble and nothing else.. I like the vocal chopping and some of the drum fills are cool too. Sounds like youve been using the Fruity slicer and the snap point set to none to get those fast drill snares. You should try putting filter sweeps on those too. Full on 'pusher style. Every tune seems to get a little better but I still think you should try to carry a theme a little more. There are couple cool bits of melody which you should try to make more of a point out of, instead of just having them loop a couple times. I enjoy listening to your tracks because you clearly improve and try something new with each one. But in terms of musical content you need to work more on having something which will grab some attention. Otherwise I think you run the risk of having a tune which people will listen to once, say "right, thats mental", and never listen to it again. But if you maintain some sort of theme or variations on the same idea/melody, youll have something which will invite the listener to take a little more seriously and make a genuine decision on whether they like it or not. At the moment this tune sounds more like an experiment, rather than a piece of music. Even stuff like venetian snares and Doormouse has some sort of musical element to it, even if its more in the timbral sense. Its like the way that contemporary orchestral music is more about creating mood and texture than melodies, but it still remains musical. Try thinking about a mood or atmospere you want to create and go from there |
not a bad idea on the filter for the vocals i'll check it out 
thx love gettin ur reviews 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by baz: 31-10-2005 20:00.
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31-10-2005 19:59 |
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Greyone
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shit some crazy shit overhere
, strongly experimental , always original.
not realy my style but i respect it.
whatch the eqing , sometimes its a bit too 'heavy' you know...
maybe some filtering fx like bandpass , notch ... on some parts to give that little more.
structure could be better too.
yooo
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