Please check out my new track 'The Triumph - Have a listen' and post your comments here!!!
This is something I made last evening. Its just a very first draft, but please give it a listen and tell me if your feeling it, and where you'd take it.
really interesting sound, the bass sound is incredible, the melody could have been a lot better though, it's very uncreative. It improves when the second synth come in. Man, this is weird-sounding. Drums are incredible. I think maybe you detuned that lead a little much. This is weird...
I'm taking that part with the uncreative melody back, it works better and better throughout the track, cool variations too.
With better sound this track will be truly amazing. Hurry up and finish it and post it, can't wait.
Strange intro. Not quite fond of the bassline. Didn't like it much, maybe because it's not worked on yet.
Don't have any idea where to take it. Hope to hear the full soon. Ups.
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Like the drum into, vocals bounce will off it. Don't like the bass brought in though, although just personal. Once you bring in the second bass line (or drop) you loose the drums in the background a little too much, and Bass, used also as part of your lead, becomes a little too overpowering. Would try to add a little more variation, starts to get repetative after a while. Not a huge fan of the synth sounds used, although do like the drums.
Beakdown is nice, I would take that area and start playing with that a little more. (3:33 - 3:54), the more I hear the synth, the less I like it. A lot of the drum patterns are good, just don't like the synth and bass sounds chosen that much, I find them a little harsh.
Feelin the drums in the intro and the chant, gives it a kinda medievil sound, nice build up structure, bass is nice too, not sure about that syth, maybe ruins the track a bit? The drums are still intersting which is good and the bass progression is nice but sorry dude that synth kills it.....
The breakdown is heavy, feelin the hip hop/steppy beat. That second drop sounds alot better without the synth. Overall def feelin the track as a whole got a nice edgy interesting sound.....
Safe, Superisk
