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stino 
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
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try to give the snare more snap in the intro
synths are good.
kinda wicked . 
ill break chopping!
try to put more catchy elements in it.
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www.myspace.com/circlelogicband
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24-10-2005 16:53 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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intro should roll in more imo , cool samples used.
nice choppage stuff (aldough drums could be more clear , they sound filtered)
abstract structure 
, would sound so much nicer if the soundquality is better + the eq'ing is on the poor side.
(if you want me to do a remix , just pm me 
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the idea on itself is verry cool , you just have to work it out a little more with some more attention on finishing.
like et.
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24-10-2005 17:01 |
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Force
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Registration Date: 24-10-2005
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I also must say the eq needs work, but I think you meant
to say that when you said it was unballanced.
I agree with Greyone get more drive into
the intro. That's all I can really say.
That elephant sample is too much 
lol.
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24-10-2005 17:11 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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This is some pretty heavy shit,..mad ass edit's on your drum's,,..bass is huge,..diggin all the stab's and vocal's,..some sick delay's goin down...this is much better than your previous track's imo,..elephant is fat ass,..keep at this style man,..track sound's heavier than all hell,..cheers,... 
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27-10-2005 07:24 |
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Hidden identity
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Registration Date: 17-02-2005
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(looks @ u with 1 eye open... "myehhhhrrrr"..)
thanx again 4 luv @ "Peace Union"
i just downloaded ur track and am listening...
??? ADVICE! : more congruent drum lines!
and i see now that you use FL cause of the speech synth in there.
...There is a little known and hard to master secoret...
Of going insain AND nuts yet keeping your cool and having structured rythums...
^first V leard dis in dnb,
then V leard dis as we learn female anatomy and... 
BZZZT!
heres a good exersize :
Copy amen or firefight drum patters but use your own drums.
copy the kick and the snare parts with wut ever perc you like,
then add hihats and short tap sounds to every empty space in between the kick and snare.
Next time you make a song use only stuff that FL came with then send me the flp
then ill add my craps and you can see exactly how i do my thing.
ill show you what i mean about congruency and all sorts of other stuff ill show you!
I have a fealing that once you get more months of expirments your going to make
REALY madd breaks that roll all the way up to heaven and hell
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I'm trying to unfuck my sig.
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14-11-2005 14:51 |
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Superisk
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Registration Date: 16-11-2005
Posts: 16
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Absolute mashup! feeling the drums big time, alot of effort gone into these....the bass works well too
The only thing id say is about the stabbing synth....sounds to me too much like an oldskool rave sound and doesnt work. Maybe some ragga horns and vocals instead?!
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The Future Is RaggaBounce
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16-11-2005 03:57 |
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Dj Kemix
Global Audio Recordings
Registration Date: 12-08-2005
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Originally posted by Hidden identity
(looks @ u with 1 eye open... "myehhhhrrrr"..)
thanx again 4 luv @ "Peace Union"
i just downloaded ur track and am listening...
??? ADVICE! : more congruent drum lines!
and i see now that you use FL cause of the speech synth in there.
...There is a little known and hard to master secoret...
Of going insain AND nuts yet keeping your cool and having structured rythums...
^first V leard dis in dnb,
then V leard dis as we learn female anatomy and...
BZZZT!
heres a good exersize :
Copy amen or firefight drum patters but use your own drums.
copy the kick and the snare parts with wut ever perc you like,
then add hihats and short tap sounds to every empty space in between the kick and snare.
Next time you make a song use only stuff that FL came with then send me the flp
then ill add my craps and you can see exactly how i do my thing.
ill show you what i mean about congruency and all sorts of other stuff ill show you!
I have a fealing that once you get more months of expirments your going to make
REALY madd breaks that roll all the way up to heaven and hell
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You are reviewing the wrong tune here buddy!!!
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http://www.myspace.com/kemikalmedia
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