kareem 
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Please check out my new track 'Sublimation' and post your comments here!!!
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19-10-2005 15:29 |
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dYzeaZe
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Well what I can say, you can do a lot better.
The bassline is totally screwed, didn't look like you've put
a lot of effort in it. Beats are decent, nice stuff coming from 2:08.
Again, the bassline doesn't sound much of fun to me.
The ending is a bit weird, and the low beep sound is somehow
disharmonical.
If you've done the beats yourself, keep up the good job!
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19-10-2005 15:43 |
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kareem
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Of course I did the beats myself.
And don't know what you mean about me not putting any effort in my bass.it's not as if I just put another note per beat for four times .
If you're talking bout the sound of the bass, then that's just my taste.
Don't think I'm offended, just don't understand or agree what you're talking bout.
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19-10-2005 16:57 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Pretty cool, like the weird basslines, kind of a drunken style feeling to it.
Could use some kind of intro, think it could sound cooler if it built up slowly from something in stead of getting straight to the drums. Cool FX here.
Lacks dynamics, drums are cool but there could easily have been a couple of breaks here and there.
Sehr kool.
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19-10-2005 20:44 |
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Steyaert
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I like that sound on the background in the intro, could be a bit louder tho. Basslines are sometimes a bit strange, but quite funky, your style e chareem 
Beats are nice, nothing bad to say 'bout them. ambient is good too. That bass at 3.00 is nice. Like that, if you'ld see in this track again, I'ld use that bass and build from there, fit that wave traveller with that bass.
I'm doing this with a track I'm working on. I like that wave traveller, but you can easly make something good sound really bad.
Neway, overall good track, keep them coming
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- dnb is all about intelligence... intelligence to seek out the music... go beyond the flow - as said by Invent
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20-10-2005 22:23 |
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Rudeone
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the drumsound is fine but its not really rollin'. dont like that effekt sound dunno what that is. yea those midrange synths sounds pretty lowfi. the idea is good but it needs more dynamic. drums roll like hell in the end good job. bass is just not my type.
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21-10-2005 22:36 |
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thefunke1
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Beats are great, although a little like on the hits used at 1:00 or so.
Base line is interesting, wobbly not my particular taste, but everyone's has there own style and tastes which keeps me coming back to listen.
Like the synth hits at around 2:00, very old rave style sound (early 90's)
Little messy atabout 3:07, some hits there seem to a little off, although mabey what you were after..
Thanks
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22-10-2005 17:33 |
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Dj Kemix
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Tight Breakz! 
Twisty Bass Line + animated bass n reece 
nice!
Very mechnical, shifts + gear style=robotech dnb
Bounce- Bounce
Broook It!
I.T.
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23-10-2005 15:27 |
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Nick ZZ
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Needs more of an INTRO. Like the wind atmo, the bass cut off is dope, def. one of those jump up sounds. Like the bridge! the synth in it needs to come up a little! The break needs a little less activity. The drums are nice and that cut-off bass is DOPE, work on the intro and try make it build just a little and the breakdown as well. Z 8/10 Z
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24-10-2005 02:01 |
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Jeller
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nice hard beat, bassline is original good job
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24-10-2005 11:45 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by kareem
Please check out my new track 'Sublimation' and post your comments here!!!
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the drums are punchy... but a bit abrupt...let the drums e thinner in the intro, then kick those fuckers in... i kind of like how they cut off at the end, but then i dont...
the melody in the intro sounds nothing lie the bassline... and the bassline is a old...or just very very very very digital... blegh...
ok...now there is absolutely no melody to this track at all...if there is...its so unorganized...
the break work is ok... got some good variations, but you really dont hear it cause so much of your attention is focused on the bassline which is so fucking wacked out, that you cant really fallow anything else...
as for the over all track... the track is a mess... the sounds are blegh.. the melodies are blegh... jsut over all blegh...
the mixdown sounds ok... some level issues with some drums, and the bass is still getting on my nerves...
better than your previous stuff, but even for 3 mins, its insanely boring....
track: 1/5
mastering:3/5
4/10
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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