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18-10-2005 19:37 |
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cynik
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thin amen.. but a nice groove to it. don't like the intro synth / could be better in terms of sound choice. the spoken bit could be a lot clearer.
drops here we go the track is rolling allright. not too fond of the melody - cheesy. only IMO, it's personal tastes. that intro synth is offkey with the reece and doesnt fit in. ah more offkey at 2:15 is this meant to be like this?
gets boring quite fast, not much happening. all of a sudden you move to hardcore with that super-loud kick.. hmm not quite diggin it.
I feel this track is going nowhere.. sorry
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18-10-2005 20:21 |
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Politix
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Yo!
I think you could leave the intro beat longer(to build up the drop).
the vocals are nice but the drop needs more build up. The loop is cool tho.
I like the drums but the kick needs boost. The snare is nice if a bit low imo. Those synths are nice but could be more prominent. The bass is nice: dark and catchy but the whole loop needs more variations.
In all there's a good song in the works here but could do with a bit more attention
cheers 4 the listen
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18-10-2005 20:31 |
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Cool stuff, like the atmosphere here, can't really see the point in having the hardcore drums there though, if you're going to keep them you should do something more with that whole part of the song, otherwise there is no point, then it's just the same thing with different drums.
It's not a bad idea though, maybe run everything through lots of distortion and scream over it 
let it last for about ten seconds of mayhem then go back to the other drums hehe, that ought to scare them, it's the undead we're talking about after all.
Production-wise it sounded good on my speakers.
Great! Keep it up!
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18-10-2005 22:57 |
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Greyone
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bangin intro , synths fit well in it .
vocals dark , could be louder.
hardtek raves comin in
Drop comin in too early imo , so intro could be longer (drum fade gradual , some more ambi maybe) but it blasting hard boy.
bass is eq'ed well , no clipping .
i hear the variation , but still some sudden drum stops would be cool , some more tweaks too.
waiting for second drop...
haha , cool man , phat 909 in my face.
'overgang' from hardcore to dnb could been done better (some overlapping , bass fade , fx , ...)
So you're still able to make nicely eq'd productions on yo crap pc. 
good job here , just some more variation , tweaks n finishing touches.
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20-10-2005 17:10 |
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Greyone
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then I guess you took too much frequencies. making space in the eq spectrum is really just taking a notch, so push the Q knob right until it sounds ALMOST the same. that's a harder method, and I very rarely use it, it's better IMO to notch the reece a bit - cause you really need that kick and it should peak in a very narrow band
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bullshit , there is a knob:
master--> right under --> Amp -->first button (left is full stereo , right is mono)
if you cant find it , PM me. 
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20-10-2005 17:13 |
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Friscko
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bullshit , there is a knob:
master--> right under --> Amp -->first button (left is full stereo , right is mono)
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that's 4&5 no?
I'm still on ye old 3.56
oldskool massive
maybe gotta make my next tune with an Akai sampler (even tough i havent got one)
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20-10-2005 17:15 |
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Friscko
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Originally posted by greyone
i hear the variation , but still some sudden drum stops would be cool , some more tweaks too.
waiting for second drop...
haha , cool man , phat 909 in my face.
'overgang' from hardcore to dnb could been done better (some overlapping , bass fade , fx , ...)
So you're still able to make nicely eq'd productions on yo crap pc.
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In the second drop, you've got that stuttering reese, and yes, indeed 2 sudden drum stops
and yeh the thunderdome-style comes in a lil too quick maybe..guess i'll have to go make some stuff to make it less sudden..
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20-10-2005 17:19 |
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cynik
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then I guess you took too much frequencies. making space in the eq spectrum is really just taking a notch, so push the Q knob right until it sounds ALMOST the same. that's a harder method, and I very rarely use it, it's better IMO to notch the reece a bit - cause you really need that kick and it should peak in a very narrow band
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use a wave editor for that and convert to mono. I think LAME encoder also does conversion but it would be of use only for the final mixdown |
bullshit , there is a knob:
master--> right under --> Amp -->first button (left is full stereo , right is mono)
if you cant find it , PM me.
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well I don't know FL so it's kinda expected that I suggest the use of a wave editor. whats bullshit about that????????
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20-10-2005 18:42 |
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Yawn
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21-10-2005 11:38 |
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Rudeone
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dont think the vocals fit. i cant understand what its saying at all...
the lead is nice and so is the drop. bass is also good. the tune needs more variation though, gets boring pretty fast. some fx in the amen (it always plays the same) and some diffrent reeces to get dynmic into the track. production is on a high level though.
tune is good but i dont like those simple amen tunes.
haha the 4 on the floor bassdrum in the end ahahhaha
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21-10-2005 11:53 |
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Nightwolf
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Well, this track really is a fine peace of jungle-ware. Very good breakbeat, enjoyable rawbass and nice effects. I think the rawbass actually sounds like it has something to do with the undead, real dark sounding. The ambient sounds and other synths are really well balanced. The drumline is kicking, and that's what I like... The trance-like drum variation is cool, because it makes the track more variable.
As a conclusion I'd like to say that I don't have anything bad to say about the track, because it's just so well made. Hell yeah I like that one!
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21-10-2005 17:44 |
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anf0 D
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drums are pretty cool... i like the intro. vox sound cool. the lil filtered synth before the drop is cool. the phat reece bass is nice. could probably have little change ups with the drums... drums change pattern which is cool, i think i heard a main pattern change... yes, yes i did.
the synths n shit are cool. you could probably add some stab fxs... maybe some extra percussion... or change up the bassline with some distorted stompin sub or something. arrangment is fine... although more change ups could happen to keep the interest. break is coool... do not like the gabber kick... just hate gabber personally. although some gabber kicks in a break beat are alright. drops fine after the gabber stuff. and i think the gabber kick is abit more powerful then the normal kick. like crushfuk said.
but still cool to listen to... keep those dark stompas comin.
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24-10-2005 07:26 |
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kanibalboy
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hell yeah man i like the theme you got goin. i actually think its very good all around.everything fits in together real tight like the different vitues fit as one piece of song better than ive been able come pull through the final. i thought it was a good pace to the groove of it ya know energy and some drive pretty good it had me startin to think i was about to have to fuck something up wich is very good.yeah though i would say for suredont stop the break at that and keep layering more complexity to the to the progression like its too much the same all the way through.but its fullo enough i think and yeah the bass and lead parts too twistem and rapem around moreand youll be chillin fat on titties for sure. titties. i love titties.
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24-10-2005 10:28 |
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Friscko
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i've put it on a cd-r yesterday (went to someone who got one), and played it on my home 2*185W system
I've gotta agree with cynik now, the kick from the break could be more puchy, and the hardcore must be less loud..
As tomorrow there will be a general strike and after a weekend and a complete week off i'm gonna work some more on it
(btw this is again one of those 'bored sundayafternoon' tracks, like resurection of evil was
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27-10-2005 19:34 |
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Nick ZZ
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Intro could use some length and depth, build it in a little slower. Don't care for the vocals at all, but like the synth in the build and I like the drop. Amens could use some beefing up, try layering the snares and kicks. Over all it's a good listen!
8/10 Z
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28-10-2005 07:20 |
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sssonarrr
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if this is one "of those 'bored sundayafternoon' tracks", then i hope you spin alot of such a tracks on bassbashing, this song has really something, improve it some more and it'll be massive
(just do whatever you like, people always talk about improve, but i know shit about EQ'ing, i i guess i can't really help you)
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28-10-2005 10:46 |
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darkstar
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Nice thick sound! Lovin' it!
That bass is a nice change. I've been hearing a lot of liquid lately and I've been dying to get away from it, thank you!
Good roller track, lacks variation but that isn't really a problem.
This thumped the crap out of my shitty little Logitech X-540s! 3:20 thereabout, lovely and deep but I can feel the drums getting soft.
Interesting idea with the hardcore, but for me this doesn't at all go with your DnB feeling. The kick is way too loud in that section.
A definite thumper though! Keep it up!
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