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anf0 D 
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Please check out my new track 'Flat Liner [complete]' and post your comments here!!!
320kbps - 14.6mb - 6m23s
all composed n mixd down in orion pro using tekniks dj headphones, n some shitty sterio of mine. im actually enjoying this tune alot.
tell us what you guys think?
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18-10-2005 04:00 |
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That heart monitor sound seem's to be louder than preview,..little bit ear pearcing,..maybe apply a lowpass filter to it.,...Your bass don't sound so good man,..it need's a different dist and eq on em,..make it more nasty,..some filtering on the bass would also lievn thing's up,...maybe make the drum's more interesting at some parts with some choppin n layerin,..in other words drum's could certrianly be spiced up...the slappin intro drum's are great so maybe work from that,...this is different from your other stuff,..this is phat man,..just need's allot more work imo,..just add a shit load more variation on the drums n bass and you've got a phat-ass track,...Anyway sorry to bust your ball's,..fuck i just think you could make this a shit load better...you've got the skillz!,..ive heard em many times... anyway track still has shit load's of potential and you can make it a million times better imo...again sorry to bust your ball's,..cheers Anfo,.. 
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18-10-2005 05:47 |
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anf0 D
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my shit must be fucked... because it is sounding alright. but yeah i could work on the drums more. thnx for checkn quikly
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18-10-2005 05:58 |
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Im just tryin to be helpfull,..i hope your not pissed,..bounce all the base to audio and put it through your sampler and appy some dist and eq,..compression ect,..should smooth it out and make it hard ass,..my latest acheivment's in producing have come from tryin to figure out how you do what you do in you sick-ass track's,..seriously,..ask Nosrac,..all your tune's are phatt-ass,..just fell you could do allot more with this one,...cheers Anfo,..time to smoke a
:...cheers..
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18-10-2005 06:33 |
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anf0 D
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lol nuh im not pissed at you... just abit disappointed in myself 
for being impatient... but ill go back n try and smooth everything out... and add some more variation. time for smoke up indeed.
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anf0 D
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Drums are very cool, Bass is still weak, those beeps must be lower, and maybe not so much?
2:58 Cool Bassline, I'd change the last two notes of it though
(you know from, duun-duuuuun to something like duuun-duuuuun)
sorry...
It's cooler than the first version, but not quite there yet.
Keep working, it's getting there.
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18-10-2005 14:28 |
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Originally posted by anf0 D
Please check out my new track 'Flat Liner [complete]' and post your comments here!!!
320kbps - 14.6mb - 6m23s
all composed n mixd down in orion pro using tekniks dj headphones, n some shitty sterio of mine. im actually enjoying this tune alot.
tell us what you guys think? |
there is no way you already finished this...
#1 rule of thumb in production SPEND AMPLE AMOUNTS OF TIME ON YOUR WORK...
quality OVER quantity
review...coming soon
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18-10-2005 21:51 |
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same issue...intro sounds too loud compared to when the drums kick in..
drums sound fine so far in teh mix...
again use the monitor thing spareingly...it got annoyting..
i dont really like the bass...its grimey, but drity in a bad way...
breakdown...half step breaks...wasnt feelin it...gotta be done right...
levels all over the place... it sounds like youre using compression because bass levels are fine one minute, and then really bad another...i dunno if thats cause of compression or not...but sounds like it..
to be honest...i dont like this at all...
The only thing that sound ok to me wwere the drums...nice and punchy...the rest...blah...
it sounds like some old cause 4 concern, but like...wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy before he did anything special to it...like THIS is the idea...not the finsihed product...
i say go back strip down the elements and re work the entire track...
i think its sitll in "idea" form atm..
Production- Nothing special at all... 3/5
Track- Again nothing groundbreaking..some cool elements...needs work... 2.5/5
6/10
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18-10-2005 21:59 |
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anf0 D
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for sure... yeah im just gonna go through each channel... turn off all compression... and mix it down from there. then add compression if i need it....
but yes after listening to it for a few times... it is pretty dirty n half ass'd... some reason i needed more comments like this
peace
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19-10-2005 00:33 |
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Originally posted by Surora23
#1 rule of thumb in production SPEND AMPLE AMOUNTS OF TIME ON YOUR WORK... |
I agree, allthough there are tracks that just seem to create themselves and are finished the first time around. When I didn my Evol Remake of The Silence, once it was finished, I didn't feel the desire anymore to work on it more. And I still don't. So what you say is only true for MOST tracks, not for all...
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19-10-2005 07:35 |
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anf0 D
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19-10-2005 08:22 |
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Originally posted by Surora23
#1 rule of thumb in production SPEND AMPLE AMOUNTS OF TIME ON YOUR WORK... |
I agree, allthough there are tracks that just seem to create themselves and are finished the first time around. When I didn my Evol Remake of The Silence, once it was finished, I didn't feel the desire anymore to work on it more. And I still don't. So what you say is only true for MOST tracks, not for all... |
yes yes MOST 
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19-10-2005 16:35 |
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Nice intro, very moody.
Yup that bleeping is fucking drilling..... Cool! Nout wrong with a little pain.
This rolls along nicely beat is nice an punchy the bass is nice too, Why did you bring the bleeping back in. Now it really is drilling. I like the bleep in that little break down but not everywhere else! Not to sure about the notes youve used for the little bass variation, possibly a bit too major.
Agaian drops back in and rolling along nicely. Bass sounds nice and fat.
AAGGHHHH. That fucking bleep is really fucking anoying. Use it far more sparingly PLEASE!!!
Overall the tune sounds good. Lots of nice little things to keep your ears busy. The drums sound good (except in the breakdowns which sound a bit limp) possibly a bit more variation wouldnt go a miss.
The bass tone are good too. Some of the notes sound a little funky though.
BUT..... Please get rid of the bleepy noises. For the intro it works and the occasional bleep is all good. But it really fucking annoying at the moment.
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19-10-2005 17:19 |
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fuckn bleep again , cut of the mids of it more , its like burned in my ears...
aaaaah , nice buildup.
drop could more mid basss.
yeah bass goes high tone like i tolda ya
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2:38 -> bass is weird , dont like it.
fucking overdistortion at dropmoment.
sorry to say but ... quality is realy 
come on man , what happend , u used to make much better tunes.
pff , i dunno man , there like too many bad thing about it.
filter the click from the kickdrum off.
structure can be hughe better ( more ambient , breakdown ? , outro ?)
eqing can be much better (overdistortion , beeps , ...)
I think you should work longer on your tracks and come up with killer tracks with loads of effects & ambi n tweaks n nice eq n all...
ashtonish me...
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19-10-2005 23:22 |
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cool tune! wont talk about the beeps lol
new version does sound cleaner 
nice beats and bass line, deep and dark. i like that fast scrapy sound that goes with the beats. give the tune some pace.
nice
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20-10-2005 01:50 |
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anf0 D
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20-10-2005 02:36 |
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aggree on the bleep thing
beats are pumping nice, with anfo D siganture all over. I'm still searching for "my" sound in the drums, you have found it. and its got no congas, whoa!
yeah, bassline could be fuller, if not less digital sounding. kind of doesnt fit in with the drumline which is fresh and live sounding. dont like the reverb you put at 5:35 on the beats, too much on it and when I crank the volume up it just sounds overpowering there
the second lfo-ed bass sound needs more serious approach too IMO
the whole track could use a structural twist here n there. sounds a bit expected.. although maybe it's just me takin a piss..
the track is nice but youve had much better sounds in your previous traks
keep up the works
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