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Politix 
Producer
Registration Date: 24-05-2005
Posts: 48
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Please check out my new track 'The Unreturning' and post your comments here!!!
Did this after moving to england. Still on fruity. Hope it goes down well.
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17-10-2005 22:11 |
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Dubrain Hertz
Sponsor
Registration Date: 23-01-2005
Posts: 329
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Who died? hehe, this is depressive shit, in a good way.
Love the synth sounds on the intro very gloomy. In fact, this reminds me of doom(not the game, the genre).
Drums coming in could have been cool in an old school way, however they just don't work.
2:25 Yeah! that melodi with that sound, spot on!
2:51 Drums are way cooler than the earlier ones
Gets a bit boring with just the bass and drums
There are some cool breaks and very nice details throughout the song, but there's some weak stuff there as well.
EQ-ing, I'm no master at that myself, but you have a lot of work to do with the sound here.
Volumes: Uneven, needs work there too.
I'd go into details but there are other people here much better at that than me, so I'll leave it to them.
Overall: You really captured a strong mood here which is what it's all about. Keep working on it.
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Download my album for free/pay what you want http://recordsofthefleshgod.bandcamp.com...years-2002-2005
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17-10-2005 23:16 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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yeah this would be really good... mixed really well. its abit dodgy atm... but the synths n stuff are cool.
keep it up 
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18-10-2005 01:05 |
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DJ Hybrid K
Producer
Registration Date: 06-02-2005
Posts: 66
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its ok... but it is really depressing stuff. oh well. maybe its just not my style.
wait did you use a 909 for the drums??????
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PEACE
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23-10-2005 15:37 |
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dYzeaZe
Blighted Mind
Registration Date: 25-12-2004
Posts: 414
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Default fruity sample in the beginning.
Default fruity ride sample.
Default fruity pad sample.
Default fruity drum samples.
Default everything.
It's only possible to listen to this if you're not familiar with FL sample library. Really wears your ears off. Sorry.
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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23-10-2005 15:51 |
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stino
Player
Registration Date: 13-07-2003
Posts: 308
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sounds loud
try using the velocity adjustment features. esp. on drums.
not bad, work it out with other samples.
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23-10-2005 23:50 |
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Superisk
Producer
Registration Date: 16-11-2005
Posts: 16
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The drums dont sound like they fall into one another, like their not from the same kit so to speak but that can be sorted by choosing your kicks snares and hats more wisely. I like the general sound of the track, dark and moody.....
had to jump for the volume control on the second drop cos the bass nearly blew my sub up but its all good! 
Just need to put more time into the mixing down and mastering of the tune....like the overall sound
Peace
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16-11-2005 03:22 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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dont like the bassdrum and snaredrum. the square synth is too cheap. that distorted thing is nice but the whole tune is lil bit overdozed. do some eqing
6/10
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17-11-2005 10:02 |
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Tetrahydra
Newbie
Registration Date: 08-02-2007
Posts: 5
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Too harmonic in the chords. Your drums sound totally flat. The melody was great until the breakdown where you just repeated it. Lame. I loved the growling bass. really evocative. Lovely. Why the hell did you drop it out to bring in that awful sub. I know it shows off your drum arrangement but who the hell cares it sucks and the drums sound so tame.
I'm in no way better off for hearing this and I doubt I made a friend, but that's my 2 cents.
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