anf0 D
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Please check out my new track 'Flat Liner ' and post your comments here!!!
all composed mixd down in orion pro...
just a quik idea slapped together...
wondering if the sound is good enough to continue working with.
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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17-10-2005 04:22 |
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equipped
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Yeah man,..this sound's great,..those slappin drum's be phat-ass,..diggin the flatline sample>,..i could see it getting anoying after a bit so maybe just in the intro and in between drop's,...the overall sound seem's fine,..short preview,..i say keep at it,..loads of potiential here,..cheers Anfo...
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Nick ZZ
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Intro: interesting / like the emergency beeps
Drop: need a little more push, maybe layer the bass or change it a little for the drop. If you brought in the fx later it might be better, and make 2 diff. fx loops or the same one effected differently.
Synth: your synths are dope!
Drums: the drums are good and you used enough varation.
8/10 Z
__ Nick & Erina Z
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Greyone
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dont like the bass (filter his ass off) , bleeps keep coming
, sounds nice.
bitch slapping anf0 drums could use some high end on snare.
1:30
i expected more.
Add some high reeces in
(like from your low grimey sub ... groooooooooooooo-Griiiiiih-griiiii -greeeee/..drop!)
eq the sub , doesnt sound good through my new Senheiser.
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Dubrain Hertz
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17-10-2005 19:50 |
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dYzeaZe
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Ok man, listened to the track 5 times now. Trying to be as objective
as I can.
Intro
Bass is a little bit clicky. Gives a little feeling of a dirty sound. Beeps.
Speeding up nicely. Lovin' it.
Beat
Nice beat, rolls a bit, don't know if I like the constant stops though.
Nice stuff at the end.
Bass
Doesn't change much but what the hell.
Effects
Flangered-phasered stuff, if I'm not mistaking. Sounds very nicely with
the other instruments.
Nothing but beat and bass. + some SFX. Or did I miss the lead synth?
You should definetly finish this one, and with a bit of variety and more
dif sounds this is going to be a pretty nice track. If I were you, I would
speed it up a little too.
Can't rate it because it's only a small piece.
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Surora23
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Originally posted by anf0 D
Please check out my new track 'Flat Liner ' and post your comments here!!!
all composed mixd down in orion pro...
just a quik idea slapped together...
wondering if the sound is good enough to continue working with. |
ok first off the bass is clipping, and the monitor sounds are too digital...use sophia for a good monitor sample...
intro is wayy too loud for the drum section... no dynamics when that big hits...
ok use the monitor thing sparingly...it got hella annoying quick...
drums are ok...
Fx are cool...
sounds like itd be a cool idea... but just by this listen...HELLA mixdown issues...
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17-10-2005 20:16 |
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Politix
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Dude this song would be so much better if you axed the beep after the drop! The beat is cool, nice drums. I think the bass could be a bit heavier, more bass and some lfo maybee imo. I mean seriously otherwise its nice n trippy. Thanx for the listen.
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17-10-2005 21:46 |
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anf0 D
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sweeet.... thanx for the comments guys... have given me lots to work with...
and yeah this is a VERY BASIC mix down n slapped together really quikly... but i can see u guys like the idea... so im gonna keep working on it during the week.
thanx heaps.
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