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wreakon 
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ok.. got the closed head phones!
wicked chops! love those bass switched... very phat 
drums are cool nice and quick lots of changes!
very mono! add some panning delays or sumin!
samples kind of sound low quality
sounds like its needs alot more eqing
nice one 
4/5
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16-10-2005 16:18 |
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cynik
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cranked up the volume!
track (good) : eventful, full of changes, structure
track (bad) : some parts are given less attention than others so it souds unfinished. the way everything falls off to the synth at 2:24 for example..
sound (good) : ultra phat bass (my floor is shaking like mad)! especially in the part before the outro. love that! almost everything sounds nice
sound (bad) : high pitched bassline (the one that starts first) could be done better: eq, distortion, could use a toned down layer. yeah, everything is mono, IMO could use with some stereo enhancements. not particularly necessary tho, would turn nice if you make it wider (drums, fx)
some of the melodies were a bit lame (2:24) but overall I think your onto something nasty here, with a bit of refinements could turn lot better
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16-10-2005 17:24 |
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Greyone
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thanx for reviewing guys.
with this track i want to show you wich style i want to go.
Greetz
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16-10-2005 19:41 |
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equipped
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Im stoggin the big fat speakers,...man i love the vocal before each drop's,..work's big time,...edit's are insane,..Really good work on getting this to go from dark to sarcastic,.. sarcastic to dark and so on,..fucking mad talent man,... Distorting a bit at>3:45....Man,..really dig right after 3:45,...this is the best thing iv ever heard man,...this is what i mean about that sarcastic to dark thing but with this part i must add funky first then sarcastic then dark!....All them deep vocal's and then that old fart sayin...pause.. on the other hand go screw youself,.."mint!"!...I really dig this Greyone,..That first drop is full on man,..synth's are sick,...Phat ass alert at>5:12,...There he is again at>5:30
,..Overall sound is a bit muddy or something,...savin this!!...Cheers... 
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 16-10-2005 20:46.
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16-10-2005 19:46 |
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Moody F
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Wow.. 
Ok! Gave it a full volume blow with my awesome
closed Sennheiser headphones! After a long, long time of reviewing a track my credo still is: downloading=writing a review.
Splattering devastating mad phat bass! Energetic raw sound building up in a nasty way towards (indeed a bit monophonic but = not annnoying or degrading) dark darkest spheres! Outro, hmmm.. imo rather would hear it ending up in full action.
But still a very 
track!! Thx for enjoying!
Go on with da wicked screw yaself stylez!!!
Grtz, Moody F
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16-10-2005 20:55 |
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sssonarrr
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very nice kicks, kind of hardcore, nicely done, very nice atmo, but damn this sounds sick, not really my style but nicely done
work a bit on those sounds that start at 5.33 they sound kind of dull, at the other hand it is the outro 
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16-10-2005 23:00 |
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anf0 D
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teknik dj headphones pumpin:
liking the intro sounds... cool basslines coming in.
first drop i like the gabber kick by its self. although the drums sound abit hektik on the drop. nice edits n shit. the arrangment is good. i like the high pitch reece. the break is good. second drop is phatty indeed.
maybe the second drop is after 4 mins :/ i dunno i like this one also.
nice pads n shit. like it how u just got the kick n bass hitting n nuthing else. heaps of change ups in this tune. cool greyone stuff. keep em coming mate.
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17-10-2005 01:06 |
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Nick ZZ
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Intro: Very nasty and dark, like that bubble bass!
Vocals: Nice vocals
Build: Nice drum in the build
Drop: nice drop way to drop the nasties!
Drumz: nice and punchy, very hard!
Breakdown: nice scary/wierd break
Second DROP: That bass synth is unreal and very dirty!
There is one part in the second verse that did not fit so well for me at 3:25, I had to go back and listen to it again. That part of the song does not seem to fit so well, but the vocals in it are dope! You really went all out on the variation! Great woork!
10/10 Z
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17-10-2005 09:35 |
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Rudeone
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dont like the quiet drums in the intro. pads and atmosfear are comin in good. mainpart is heavy maybe to overdozed? like the drums chopping and the reece. i dont like the sound of the low synth which sounds like an layerd bassdrum. maybe better EQing? drums just sound like simple amen. bored of it 
wow really like the harmonies and pads at about 04:00. good vibes.
good choon :-)
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17-10-2005 12:56 |
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TechDiff
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Nice moody intro, dont really like the rythmic thing in the mackground but I guess thats just taste. This is building up nicely but the vocals come in a bit to suddenly for my likeing. Yeah man this is cool. I really like the blasts of drums. Could be a little clearer though and much more tweaked around, thats the stuff I love. Maybe try stuttering the bass with them for a full on Breakcore assualt!
Some parts sound like you've put more work into them than others which is a shame because the ambient parts seem to lack any depth.
The second drops is quality too. I really like the heavy parts of this but the quieter parts just dont have the same quality about them.
I dont like the bass at 5:15, but the drum fills before it are good. I dont really like the last heavy parts of this tune the atmospheric synth is cool though.
All in all this is a good tune but I think it could be a lot better, The atmospheric parts could really use more depth, Some creative panning could do this really well. Also I think the drums are good but could do with a little more than just the good ole agresive slicing thing, which does work but isnt enough in my opinion.
Please do more to this beacause it could go from being a good tune to a really great tune.
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17-10-2005 18:12 |
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Greyone
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wow loads of feedback , i'm beginning to like it lol.
@equiped : thanx for enjoying
@Moody : indeed outro's a bit going to nowhere , kinda wanted to finish it to fast.
@sssonarrr: thanx for going to my site , and i love Hardcore distorted 909 kickdrums banging through my speakers.
@Anf0 : I still want to collaborate in the future , thanx for reviewing.
@Nick: indeed it sounds a bit strange but i guess thats just me lol.
@Rude:one : rude:one = ruven ?? nice site you've got. Overdose... i like it.
@Techdiff : i suck at ambient + i set the track mono... 
@ everone else who reviews: I cutted the click at the start , made the muddy drums a bit less muddy , added a 5% reverb on the whole track and i RE- EQed it.
I'm bussy with (re)making my tracks right for a demo cd .
~ Greetz 6R3Y0N3 ~
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17-10-2005 18:35 |
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17-10-2005 19:58 |
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Surora23
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if you need headphones or loud speakers, that says immediatly that it has a poor mixdown...not to take away form the track cause i havent even heard it yet... but just keep that in mind before you post that 
ok listneing now...
i dunno waht that lil intro kick clicky thing was...but get rid of it...
The sfx are cool...and i can hear the drums in the bg... sounds cool..
Thers this kind of horny sound in there...like a tuba or soemthing...i dont like it (imo) I think that rapid hat thing is a bit cheesy...
Drums are eq'd too hi in the mix...the hats are piercing my ears...
kick sounds fine....
The melody you use after droping out the reece is cheesy as fuck...make it detuned or something...or just use darker notes... i hate that hardcore kick thing...imo it doesnt work well in dnb, and i even said the same thing to surya when he posted his track a while back when he tried using the hardcore kick... sounds like ass in dnb imo...
The reece is OK...seeems very dry and week...needs warming...so it sounds like you used a sample rather than a vst...but i could be wrong...
i dont really fallow where you take teh track when you go into teh strait breaks...you go from this amen smasher kind of thing, then into this almost downtempo dnb liquid thing, and its random and doesnt work....ok a third drop? cool i guess...but should be done right...
while in teh process of all this you got some kicks being drowned out, then you got these kicks that punch too loud.. sounds like there is some compression issues too, OR you layered some breaks with different levels, so it doesnt equal out in the mix..near the end of the track you filter everything out and has this sub rolling relaly loud, then you bring the breaks back in...i didnt fallow taht at all...
Ive heard many artistically approached tracks, and sounded much much better than this...no offense but this was taken in some random directions
overall
Track: Its OK..nothing groundbreaking, and i got bored listening to it hella quick...
Mixdown: issues...not too fond of the bass sounds, and teh drums were killin me...
dont really think this could hgo anywhere hoenstly... my 2 cents...
6.5/10
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17-10-2005 20:12 |
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dYzeaZe
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A pretty neat intro. Bassy stuff sounds really nicely. Going into
something really big, bad, nasty, powerful. Waiting for a lot of stuff.
Pressure is growing. And there it goes...
wtf. Really dissapointing. Didn't like the pressure release a lot. Beat is
too pitched for me. Stuff from 2:08 is pretty nice. Some saw'y sound
on 2:24 dissapoints - totally disharmonic, did u plan it to be there?
4:29 fuels the fire a bit. 5:12 - total change. I like it.
The "on other hand go screw yourself" phrase doesn't leave the same
impression any more (after being repeated 3 times now).
Nice fadeout.
Overall a nice track with sudden changes of mood. Can be called
?complex?, but I ain't sure about that.
Even if it's not my style - 8/10. Keep up the good work!
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17-10-2005 20:17 |
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baz
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great product you got here bruv'
i only checked it on "heavy duty" speakers an headphones cuz i had none otherz available
anyway love this track man n,real nice ambi,cool drumz
voice sample does sound too clear to my humble opinion 
hardcore basses are fat nice work
the last part (startin @5 min flat) has fuckin awesome drumedits but i do think the bassline could be re-eq'd
anywayz man nice track love the experimentalism
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17-10-2005 21:18 |
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Greyone
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Surora , you added some good points inhere.
I didnt thought anyone would notice , but apearently you did lol 
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I still learn how to compress... that was my prob. inhere too. (you baskick suddenly sounds louder and stuff...)
Hardcore basskicks in dnb is totally in , at least in my opinion ...
Artists like Dylan , Tech Itch , Resonant evil etc have done it before ...
with succes.
So i try to follow their footsteps keeping the Basskick alive.
See ya.
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18-10-2005 11:17 |
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Originally posted by greyone
Surora , you added some good points inhere.
I didnt thought anyone would notice , but apearently you did lol
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I still learn how to compress... that was my prob. inhere too. (you baskick suddenly sounds louder and stuff...)
Hardcore basskicks in dnb is totally in , at least in my opinion ...
Artists like Dylan , Tech Itch , Resonant evil etc have done it before ...
with succes.
So i try to follow their footsteps keeping the Basskick alive.
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you is forgetting desert storm breakcore squad here(before they made dnb too ya know)
first to do it an best to do it
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24-10-2005 16:26 |
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sssonarrr
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Originally posted by Surora23
Thers this kind of horny sound in there...like a tuba or soemthing...i dont like it |
[off topic]
i hope this was about the track and not about your girlfriend[/offtopic]
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24-10-2005 18:51 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by sssonarrr
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Originally posted by Surora23
Thers this kind of horny sound in there...like a tuba or soemthing...i dont like it |
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i hope this was about the track and not about your girlfriend[/offtopic] |
cracked me up!
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