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Dubrain Hertz 
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The whole song needs a bit more power, but you're onto something. Hard to tell what that guy is saying, you should try to make it clearer, sounds kinda cool. Maybe some more variation?
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11-10-2005 13:58 |
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S.O.T.A.
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What's up? Kind of an unusual start. I like how the techno stuff fades in . The last note it plays doesn't quite feel right but that's just me. Bassline is cool, vocal is hard to hear. It's too slowed down. That scratch sample was awsome. I'm having a hard time distinguishing structure sorry.
Cool needs a few adjustments.
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11-10-2005 20:02 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by S.O.T.A.
What's up? Kind of an unusual start. I like how the techno stuff fades in . The last note it plays doesn't quite feel right but that's just me. Bassline is cool, vocal is hard to hear. It's too slowed down. That scratch sample was awsome. I'm having a hard time distinguishing structure sorry.
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yea i hear wot u say about the stucture. been working on that today. decided to scrap the vocal (it sounds lame) expect updated version. the name of the track will probably be different as the name came from the sample i decided to scrap. thanks fopr the comments 
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11-10-2005 22:30 |
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S.O.T.A.
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11-10-2005 23:49 |
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anf0 D
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hope u dont mind if i hold off till updated version, or some more reviews on this one?
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12-10-2005 01:34 |
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Cridian
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nice work
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12-10-2005 21:07 |
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teknyne
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NO PROBS MATE, UPDATED VERSION UP NOW. ENTITLED THUMBSCREW NOW CAUSE I SCRAPPED THE SAMPLES THAT THE PREVIOUS NAME CAME FROM
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13-10-2005 23:42 |
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n8teman15
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yeah dude nice work
stil dont kno if i like the long silence at the start its kinda comical
kept thinkin o its a dodgy file no its muffeled no ere it come yeah its a tune.
as the tune go's tho
nice some really good ideas loved it only thing i didt like was the vocals should be crisper and happen more often
nice 1
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keep it glass free
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