drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » kareem - Sorrows pain kareem - Sorrows pain Author Post kareem Cool Producer Registration Date: 10-11-2004 Posts: 146 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Sorrows pain' and post your comments here!!! long time since I've posted a track. Hope you like 08-10-2005 19:13 wreakon evol genius Registration Date: 05-10-2004 Posts: 437 Helpfulness rating:  thats a albino bass preset aye? drums sound thin.. bass is well.. bad sounds like youve recorded yourself blowing into pipe or sumin??? sorry __ {{{d-_-b}}} The Patch lab - Download free vst patches, banks and kits mylamespace 09-10-2005 02:34 Steyaert Producer Registration Date: 29-06-2005 Posts: 76 Helpfulness rating:  Some unique basslines you have there again Sjareem, Drums are ok, like those. Change at 1.54 ... I hope this will be blazing, ... hmm, more power is needed in this part. 2.50 yeah there's the power. This is again a unique Sjariem copyrighted track I like the drums and the strucure is very good to, only some melodies are a bit strange. Overall nice song. Keep on producing __ Steyaert a.k.a. Rupzzz - dnb is all about intelligence... intelligence to seek out the music... go beyond the flow - as said by Invent 09-10-2005 13:55 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  Bass that drop's at>00:21 feel's sloppy imo,..Thaty might be excactly what you were shootin for so just a wee opinion,.. Nice effect on the drum's at>00:10,...more of this and louder,....Drums are really good in the editing side of thing's but maybe layer a phat punchy kick in there and some detuned bongo's,..drum editing is really impressive at 2:40,..nice one on that...thing's sound alot more full toward's the end,..actually from 2:45 on track sound's great,...just don't dig that bass but a phat track indeed,....cheers... __ Space 09-10-2005 22:24 thefunke1 Cool Producer Registration Date: 09-12-2004 Posts: 151 Helpfulness rating:  Hmm.. starts off well, drums need a little punch... Bass brought in at 0.21 sounds a little distorted... doesn't seem to balance with the rest of the track. Ideas are there, although starts to get a little repetative after a minute of so. Try bringing the in same bass line with a different hoover sound, then layer it back in the bass line again. Drums really need a little more kick to them, fade into the background a little too much, the change up around 2:00 is good, although the work gets lost in the Sub. To be honest the synth, gets a little boring after a while. Good ideas, although variation is needed in Bass and lead throughout the track to keep interest going. Drum work is good, although they need to more pronounced in the track. Thanks for the listen. __ www.acidplanet.com 09-10-2005 22:46 Dubrain Hertz Sponsor Registration Date: 23-01-2005 Posts: 329 Helpfulness rating:  didn't like this much until 1:50 that synth saves it, sounds quite good from there and out. fix the first half and you may have a killer, that's my opinion anyway. __ Download my album for free/pay what you want http://recordsofthefleshgod.bandcamp.com...years-2002-2005 10-10-2005 15:26 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  dont like the strings notes in the intro drums are too thin and tinny, you need a resonant snare to accompany that crack one, also the kick needs eqing, layering or both? the bass is just too loud for everything else and IMO never put such a heavy reverb on bass. not too fond of the melody either not feeling the sounds at 1:29 what are those anyway? then at 1:50 comes the change, too suden, try changing / resequencing any or all of the sounds (drums/bass/fx) for the reece-like synth that enters. which is not bad, in fact it's the best part of your tune. not digging the fx sounds you put here I'd say drop almost everything else and build around that synth __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 10-10-2005 18:02 Jeller Producer Registration Date: 11-11-2004 Posts: 79 Helpfulness rating:  good track, nice construction etc production quality is also pretty good except that i would make the beats a bit harder also the filtered wow sub is nice but the melody sounds a bit strange 3.5/5 __ Jeller 11-10-2005 22:20 Schmidi Producer Registration Date: 26-07-2007 Posts: 74 I like that you are using some odd sounds (something I love to do too). I don't like the synth bass at about 1:45 though. Might want to beef up the main drums just a touch. Keep it up! __ The best DnB was made 10 years ago, I'm slowly building my time machine... 16-01-2008 23:52 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » kareem - Sorrows pain