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wreakon 
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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havent heard the other versions
man that bass is massive in the intro... not really good for mixing though
fuck it sounds wicked! bloddy long intro
cool drop but! kinda needs a bit more pace.. some more fast synth dounds or sumin to get it moving
you should filter out the super low freq! its causeing some clipping
cool tune but too long and weird structure.. love the bass!!
3.5/5 
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09-10-2005 02:54 |
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thefunke1
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Registration Date: 09-12-2004
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Dark intro, nice heavy sounds, although in some parts they sound like they are fighting for attention with each other.
Like the variation once the drop comes in, although lead up is a little long. Like the break at 3:23. Bass line gets repetative. Like the use of some of the fliters.
Would try to add a little more variation to the bass line, bring in some other bass sounds in same pitch, etc. to mix it up a bit.
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10-10-2005 00:34 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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bass rumbles through really nicely. drowns the drums abit. maybe some compression could be used on ze drums.
yeah i could do some mad shit if i could get that bass sound. im shit though.
intro is pretty long n boring.... its can be long... but not boring... sets the mood for the tune.
drop is phatty... ur basslines are mean cunts... and sound very very good. drums are alright after the drop.
gets a abit samey and boring... need more excitment... those basslines need something to back em up... cause thats all this tune has goin for it id say... the fkn phatty basslines... other then that tis abit boring.
keep working the xcitment of the track 
with dramamtic builds and change ups.
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10-10-2005 04:17 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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11-10-2005 14:03 |
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muphasta
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OK then,
I think the high filtered bass is too 80's which isnt bad but i think that it wasnt the intention. the low sub s a bit too loud and the beats are bit square and too back ground. yep beats are way too minimalistic. the breaks U use are hardly heard. it also needs more twists and turns. U need to fill up some gaps here and there and maybe try and ad distortion to the filtered bass after the filter effect.
I think you have some work left to clear the rest of the smoke!
4/10
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13-10-2005 13:04 |
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ry-man
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Registration Date: 18-01-2008
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nice tune, i like the beat, it doesnt sound cheesy
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