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Greyone Greyone is a male

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- old track -

delete this one please

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Greyone: 25-01-2008 00:41.

02-10-2005 11:38

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goddamn i got this real nice review all writtn an done an my fuckin browser hangs
here's the shortcut version of my review
ur buildups are both real great , nice powerfull shit
but then when the beat drops i get the feeling that the buildup was actually quite harder,(but i geus those are you eq-prob's u mentioned earlier)
bout the drumz i got nothing to mention
vocal samples(the whispering ones) turned backwards , sounds ok too
the vocal samples (i think it's from the versionist website) should have been cut up more an should make some more chaos
(i also noticed the backward vocal sample fading in @5:12-->5:30 there nicely hidden man an sound quite cool (first up i tought it was a synth Big Grin

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3:10---->4:08 great buildup once again but this one is a bit too long should only be 30 sec orso
anyhow finish this one cuz it's got what it takes to be a good tune
Bigup

8/10

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02-10-2005 12:44

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youre getting real good at intros, dark n heavy

drops: farting bass! lol dont like it. drums are pretty good on the other hand, nice breakdown sequence after the drop

second bass is way better, dark neurofunkish

nice work on the second drop. Im missing some more elements here while the dark atmo sample gets a bit overused

nice effort, good work with the drums, second bass, intro.. but that farting lets it down, sadly

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02-10-2005 14:10

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nice intro. When the bass comes in there's like something missing, and the bass sound needs some cleaning. Nice beats, the snare drum should be a bit louder, me thinks. The kick could be a bit louder to. Nice breaks. The sub is nice, like that. Nice fading, oh second part is good. Maybe let the beat roll a bit more in the second part, a good amen 'ld be nice I think. The vocal is nice, like that very much. Some working on those bassline, to get the song more pumping 'ld be good.
Nice track, good work.

grass

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02-10-2005 14:17

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intro is neat, could have more stuff going on though.

bass line is tight. but it sounds like it hits the mids to much. maybe add a deep sub underneath it, to fill it out.

nice work choppin up the amens.

i think the song could use a lead.

cool song, nice one. Bigup

02-10-2005 16:11

Greyone Greyone is a male

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Originally posted by stickbubbly
intro is neat, could have more stuff going on though.

bass line is tight. but it sounds like it hits the mids to much. maybe add a deep sub underneath it, to fill it out.

nice work choppin up the amens.

i think the song could use a lead.

cool song, nice one. Bigup

No amens , Optik assasins drum.

@ everyone else :

yeah i know the bass isn't that great , but i kinda struggled with it to get it right.

I'm not really satisfied with the overall , I know it misses something but what ??

...just another drumnbass track , i should be more original isn't it.

i think i'll check the breakcore side next.

Anyway thanx for checkin' out n commenting.
I'll review everybody who does it with my tracks too , cheers.

02-10-2005 21:40

S.O.T.A. S.O.T.A. is a male

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That amient noise is nice. The drums fade in well. Bassline is interesting. It sounds good I think the bass needs more distortion. I forgot to use that massive sample it's really cool. I like the second bass better. Yeah second drop is very nice. Really diggin the drums nicely arranged. Man this song is long. cool shit
LATER

03-10-2005 06:44

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i really like the intro and the build to the drop... but i dont know if im feeling the bass either... althuogh the cool high pitch is cool.
crazy edits and shit.
the mix needs abit of a clean buts its not too bad. very greyone style this tune is.
break is cool, i like the filtered basslines. the beast insides u vox could have more p0wer, n the growl... nice editing on the beast inside vox before the drop.. aww at the drop i was feeling the filtered bassline u had drop it... but this is still fine man. mega crazy remix. good shit man... keep it up Bigup

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04-10-2005 01:24

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Self Destruct MSG

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04-10-2005 02:18

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Originally posted by syncrodee
Dark and Misterious Intro...
Very Choppy....like treacherous ocean waves..
the drums are very slotted ,hits are interveled, spaced to reduce flow, and smoothness...yes, anamilistic...this track represents the evil that we invite into our lives and then let it consume us with out protection...
A dead spirit,"Hungry Wicked Flesh" looking for it's Victims only to devour them...
This track is geared twords praising
The evil in this lost world...
An evil we let manifest with in us...

The Beast= The Evil One of This World.

~Syncrodynamix

DJ Kemix???

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04-10-2005 16:09

Greyone Greyone is a male

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can you rephrase that in more human words.

@ everyone else : thanx for the feedback .

@ AnfO D , Alldough this is greyone-style , i don't really like it.
Only the drums that i cutted ...
You are much better in bass creation and editing.
I want to have an original style though , i guess i'll prove myself in my next track.

Big Grin

thanx again folks !

04-10-2005 16:31

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“The Beast Inside You Will Arise.”

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04-10-2005 17:54

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why are you reviewing the vocal?

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04-10-2005 18:13

Greyone Greyone is a male

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Originally posted by syncrodee
Tripped out drumfire with a weak baseline.
This baseline is stale like old potato chips.
I’m not hating on your material just simply pointing out some areas to examine.

This track is funky man, bouncy at points, so the concept is there...
Work out your baselines...I really like your filtering techniques, nice dude!

Just don’t agree with your message that’s all “The Beast Inside You Will Arise.”
“The Beast” in this connotation is a creature that devours, which is carried with in you,
when you call to it....

Devour : consume destructively.
Destroy : put out of existence by severe damage or attack.
Beast : noun 1. an animal, especially a large or dangerous mammal. 2 a very cruel or wicked person.
-ORIGIN- Latin bestia.

Ok, let’s sum it down.
You are telling your people “Massive” that some dangerous force is on the rise...
This can be a warning or simply prophesying to your people that a beast will rise within them, are you calling for Destruction?.....

A person who loves does not destroy...it’s that simple....
Darkness can consume you beyond your understanding...
Darkness is simply A way Humans can describe where there is no light existent.
Darkness it’s self does not exist, it is merely the absence of light.
Light can be studied, darkness can not. Darkness cannot be broken down. A simple ray of light tears the darkness and illuminates the surface where the light beam finishes. Dark is a term that we humans have created to describe what happens when there's lack of light."

Evil is a term which man has created to describe the result of the absence of God's presence in the hearts of man.

SyncroDynamix.

who the fuck do you think you are ?
All i ask is a simple review !
I don't have to know what the fuck the vocal is saying , it's a freakin' remix weirdo.
Tell yo poems on a cocksucking poetry site but not on my review page.
the fuck do i care...
Mad

05-10-2005 19:56

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Reespect....

My apologeez....

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05-10-2005 23:34

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Good evil vibes, cool edits, and tension...It just feels like there is something missing from the beat for me. The drums sound hollow (an inherent flaw of the amen sometimes). Maybe add a simple, but thumping/compressed 2 step beat underneath to support the track. From what I am hearing it might even work really well rhythmically with what you have already. Good ideas so far though.

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20-01-2008 04:25

Greyone Greyone is a male

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its a track from 3 years ago , should have been deleted :s

delete this one please

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