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Please check out my new track 'puffin on leafs and workin on beats(self distruct sequence)' and post your comments here!!!
It's just a preview sorry
tell me what you think and if you use reason and want to help finish it
let me know
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28-09-2005 04:03 |
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stickbubbly
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intro is pretty cool. nice drums
the lead sounds you have bending and twisting are amazing.
evol melody.
i didnt like the vocal samples though. too distant and muffled.
everything else sounds good so far.
nice one.
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28-09-2005 22:22 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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29-09-2005 00:02 |
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anf0 D
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yeah this is cool shit man...
the drums are pretty cool, nice arrangment.
the intro sounds are nice. the atmo sounds nice with a lil bit of flange, and the delyd synth riff is cool. the vocals need abit more high end freqs, dey are sitting too far back in the mix. drop is cool, mad basslines. cool shit man... finish it. if i was using reason id like to help finish lol.
keep em coming man.
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29-09-2005 01:06 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Again thank you all for your generous comments
The vocals were kind of a last minute thing
I'm making a woo ha remix now though
it's just taking a while
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29-09-2005 01:50 |
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anf0 D
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29-09-2005 02:22 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Yeah I know I just start making something and get an idea for something else
I figure if I have a bunch of decent starts then when I go back I can have an easier time
It's kind of for periods of inactive producing thoughts
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29-09-2005 02:25 |
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equipped
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This pack's a punch,..vocal's sound phat,..drum's be slappin me sydway's,..maybe layer with a phat kick ,...and that main synth could do with some more automation,..and a wee bit of reverb,..cheers for the preview S.O.T.A.
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29-09-2005 06:56 |
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Greyone
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Intro could be more fade in + add some more ambient.
nice drums , were they edits of something ?
Dr Dre . wow , the bass effects are massive !
Drop is awesome.
Nice , nice , nice , just the bass is overpowering
--> either compress or EQ.
The sub of the bass is too distorted and starts clipping (cutt of where it stucks)
Love it when the bass goes from down tone to high tone.
I should say , finish this one.
see ya
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03-10-2005 10:34 |
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syncrodee
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Well aranged drum attacks....
Leads are outstanding....
Sound effects are compliments...
This track is not on the progressive
side...It sticks to its main loop...
Which acctualy works when a loop is very effective...
Nice wind atmo.
Drum hits are mashed well, nice construction bro!
Hard synths, flooding hovers, awesome reece.
Needs Structure variations....
Strong Style...Now attach a powerfull message to your
track...what ever you represent....
Which here you are representing the use of mariujana.
However, you can get some strong messages across, whether it be for
Justice or Curruption. (good or evil)
It all depends on your heart...
It's not what you know....
It's what you can teach.....
~Syncrodynamix
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04-10-2005 01:58 |
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04-10-2005 04:50 |
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djphrenzy
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I might put a high-pass delay on the break right before the break down to smooth out the transition a bit.
Love the bass. Reminds me of an Ascend track I had from like 98. So sick. Nice one.
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23-01-2008 03:33 |
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intro is pretty cool. nice drums
the lead sounds you have bending and twisting are amazing.
evol melody.
i didnt like the vocal samples though. too distant and muffled.
everything else sounds good so far.
nice one.
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08-02-2008 17:22 |
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