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Author Post baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'i'm fresh!!' and post your comments here!!! this is the same shit i posted yesterday (the one with no reviews) only i got to hear it on diff soundsystems yesterday so i changed a few things here an there it's 4:00 orso now review it or not but be sure to check it out __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 24-09-2005 10:25 davieb1 Producer Registration Date: 04-08-2005 Posts: 28 like the bouncy intro but after that tis just a mess the drums sound weak and the levels are all over the place, need to sort some compression on the drum and reprogram them to be fare. melody is realy dull need more life in it and no real bass sound, sound all a bit too clinical need to flow more. and those volcal samples whcih youve slice sound terrible i think thats a combination of how repetitive it is and lack of creativity, but like the bass sound that comes in near the end. keep that sound n start again. good luck 24-09-2005 14:21 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by davieb1 like the bouncy intro but after that tis just a mess the drums sound weak and the levels are all over the place, need to sort some compression on the drum and reprogram them to be fare. melody is realy dull need more life in it and no real bass sound, sound all a bit too clinical need to flow more. and those volcal samples whcih youve slice sound terrible i think thats a combination of how repetitive it is and lack of creativity, but like the bass sound that comes in near the end. keep that sound n start again. good luck fair to give ur opinion __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 24-09-2005 17:55 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  like how it starts but expand the intro a bit more again similar volume changes (not good) with the beats at 00:52 as in you previous traks. vocal cuts around 2nd minute are an interesting idea but sound too dry - add reverb. lol at 2:30 I guess that was the idea, making it funny the trouble is it still is too messy and there is not a single element that could serve as a "lead" and keep you focused, you dont have a bassline so you might try adding one __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 24-09-2005 20:41 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by cynik lol at 2:30 I guess that was the idea, making it funny yeah that was the original plan yeah on the reverb issue i do agree i already added a hiphopvocal but havin hard times keepin it to the beat so i just erased it before uploading ( that an some fuckin copyright issues shit ) anyway thx for reviewing __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 25-09-2005 11:22 Steyaert Producer Registration Date: 29-06-2005 Posts: 76 Helpfulness rating:  Baz, ... from Liverpool? I'm sorry to say this, but it's a bit of a crappy track. You have nice elements in it, but it's been really crappy put together. Very chaotic, there's no real structure in it. You have certain drumloops that sound nice, and the idea of lots of variation in your drums is good, but there has to be a bit of a pattern, and in this song there just all mixed together, try to stick in a 4 step pattern, and use a breakdown drumloop in the 4th step, this 'll give more structure to it. The second part with the vocals isn't that bad. It just needs a good bass melody. Try to use simple bass tunes every 1 step, and use a tremolo or autowah, experiment a bit with that, and no doubt you'll find some melody you like and sounds good. Keep on working on this track. It has potential, not a lot but enough deffintly work out the second part. grass __ Steyaert a.k.a. Rupzzz - dnb is all about intelligence... intelligence to seek out the music... go beyond the flow - as said by Invent 01-10-2005 17:33 Greyone Master Producer Registration Date: 01-04-2005 Posts: 6,285 Helpfulness rating:  intro could be more filled with ambi. drums coming in ... i see you have a problem withd drums overlapping each other (i had this too back in the past) , if you're working with FL i can help you. Just pm me. Good to hear some originality on this site , nice experimental . real ruff but the EQing sucks cocks , leveling too i'm afraid . Bass jumping in sounds nice. Outro ?? nice style Baz , just take the above things in mind Greetz 6R3Y0N3 01-10-2005 18:08 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by greyone nice style Baz , just take the above things in mind Greetz 6R3Y0N3 thx i'll do my best __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 01-10-2005 18:44 Schmidi Producer Registration Date: 26-07-2007 Posts: 74 Well, I prefer to encourage growth rather than discourage it so...The beat chops are alright. Kind of a hard step vibe ala DJ SS. Work on structure more. I think you could have something cool by means of some tweaking with the groove you got at about 3:50. The beginning musical elements are not great unfortunately. I would suggest really getting in touch with whatever synth you are using and tweak the sounds so they are more your own. Keep it up though, just one bedroom producer to another! __ The best DnB was made 10 years ago, I'm slowly building my time machine... 31-01-2008 07:15 PEAHEAD Wicked Producer Registration Date: 27-07-2005 Posts: 416 Helpfulness rating:  yeah agree with grey pretty much on this, intro is a bet empty,, no offence mate but ive herd alot beter stuf of you before, this jus feels allover the place how u bin neways man, long time no speak 31-01-2008 09:15 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  ..........DUDES ........TRY CHEKING THE FIRST POSTS DATE BEFORE REVIEWING OLD TRACKS quote: 24-09-2005 10:25 been like over a year since ive uploaded stuff to the site .... thinking bout doin that today but it's all far from dnb stuff now .. core shit __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 02-02-2008 13:02 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » baz - i'm fresh!!