S.O.T.A. - OPTIKASSASIN-THE BEAST(S.O.T.A.'s view from the outside)   |
S.O.T.A.
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Please check out my new track 'OPTIKASSASIN-THE BEAST(S.O.T.A.'s view from the outside)' and post your comments here!!!
sorry this is the one
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24-09-2005 00:25 |
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davieb1
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intro sounds mint quite impressed, after that not so impressed i was expecting a top notch tune after the intro but what i found was it didnt live up to the intro, drums need more variation and few more breaks the beat isnt bouncy enough if u no wat i mean. ur sound choice is good just need a better riff for the bass aswell. has the potetntial my firend keep it up.
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24-09-2005 18:11 |
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optikal_assassin
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awwww come on man, fuck it, finish this one out man, you got a hell of a start on it, just kick up them breaks and let it roll man.
__ Jungle Snipa on MySpace
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24-09-2005 22:12 |
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S.O.T.A.
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24-09-2005 22:20 |
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Nick ZZ
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Gotta finish it, it's good so far. Just add a kick layer that punches threw the bass alot more. That and or do some trim on the bass so the kick can be heard. Z
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25-09-2005 05:42 |
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cynik
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that intro is really somthing, almost epic sound you got there
I really like what youve done with the samples, like the inteligent bassline..
you will need to boost the drums a bit. I guess they were clipping with higher volume (the drums) I know cause I messed with them too, gave clipping in Reason. thats cause OA already processed an EQ-ed them so when you try layering them, you get noise and clipping very easy so be careful there. might even try filtering some of the hits esp. snares so you have one deep punch and a cracky one over it. hope that helps
everything else is nice, will be looking for the finished
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25-09-2005 15:27 |
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stickbubbly
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intro is wicked.
lead is amazing.
really cool track so far.
nice one
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25-09-2005 16:40 |
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S.O.T.A.
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thank you for your generous comments
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25-09-2005 20:21 |
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anf0 D
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yes the intro is mint id say....
the basslines are beasty as usual... shame about the drums though man... they do need to be more beasty. not enough low end i think. maybe try layering your drums a couple of times to get a phat sound out of them. but yeah this has lots of potential for a good remix.
keep workin it man. and dont worry about what people say about your shit... they probably cunts and enjoy beings cunts... i know i do sometimes XD
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26-09-2005 01:05 |
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S.O.T.A.
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I know about the drums sorry, I used his amen fill and other beat with drum machine beats but the drum machines beats were way to loud in comparrison
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26-09-2005 03:22 |
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zebediah
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09-10-2005 00:45 |
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dark dark dark!!!!
that bass that caomes in first needs widening or summit sounds too direct.
good tune tho, love this dark shit!!
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31-01-2008 19:01 |
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