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nice dark atmospherik intro... the drums are different to usual... got some snare action... probably need a more punchn phat kick... not like a bassdrum. put a sub behind the kick so i got punchn bass kickdrum sorta thing. some cool basses in there. hats an cymbals are alright, although i think you could probably EQ them abit better because dey is abit hard to hear. could do with some cool change ups at the end of every 8 or 16th bar or whateva da fudge it is. the arrangmnt of the whole tune is a bit differ to the usual if you know what i mean... intro is maybe abit long compared to the body, and its just intro > body > outro....
theres no like: intro > build to drop > body > break > change > outro sorta thing goin down.
this something to listen to but i dont think it would rock out on the dancefloor all that well.
keep it up 
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21-09-2005 00:56 |
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Agree with anfo,..maybe turn them hat's up a wee bit..sick intro,..nice n heavy,.. enough bass that my cat was attacking my wobblin woofer,..hope he don't scratch a hole in it..drum's sound great but maybe throw a chopped/sliced break in there to fill them up...try pitchin a couple of the snares,...might not sound good with this,..just an idea,,..crash sound's fantastic at>3:43...nice work ZZ crew.........cheers......
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21-09-2005 02:02 |
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Nick ZZ
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Appreciate the reviews fellas, I was kinda afraid to make it too long, I had been listening to it alot and was starting to over listen the track; if you know what I mean. I will fix the cymbals and I will see if I can get the kick to punch threw the sub layer a bit more. I was going for a harder feel, what else can I do to get that? Appreciate it! Z
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21-09-2005 02:35 |
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21-09-2005 02:40 |
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Hello. Some cool sounds in the intro. Strange beat. Some interseting stuff here. I feel like it could be more in your face. On the right track it has a darkness of it's own which is cool. Throw some big distorted basslines in there. Cool later
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21-09-2005 20:57 |
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Greyone
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intro atmosphere is as good as always 
nutn to remark.
but the drums ... 
, i don't know how you make them and i won't break you down , but they need some improvement imo.
kick : seems to be ok , maybe boost at 250 -500 hz
snare : has only low end , ad some more mid (3000hz) and high(8000hz) end to it .
hats : pump them up !
cymbals: seems to be ok too , but they could be a bit louder.
ghostnares: i think there's yo biggest problem , they're like the same as your snare.
dunno about this track , the ambi-feeling is right but:
-no exiting drop
-drums
-structure could be better too.
Don't take this as an insultement , i just want to help.
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22-09-2005 16:40 |
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Nick ZZ
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