Greyone
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my fav producer on this site .
Intro seems to be good , aldough i remark that yo ghostsnare's allways overwhelm in velocity , but thats just me and just yo style.
They seem to be better in the drop , love the sub/bass thas wandering around.
2:20 has a good reece blending , maybe you could add some reece hits (layerd on kick) sometimes....
3:50 got them good fx going on.
I see your high vintage stuff gets better and better
sudden breakstops and crazy ends are allways nice to hear .
Exept for some bass clips here and there there's nothing to remark in fact.
Maybe some more ambient fx and sci-fi stuff.
Nice track anfo.
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PEAHEAD
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ohhh i like the feel of this 1. ohh it has some real good elements in it. that distorted bass adds a real nice touch. break down at bout 1.10 is wery wel laid out. and the break in nice but the drums are a bit high. and the bass needs more boost. this is a real good track man. hats of for this 1 boyz n girls. all i could say is you need to even your sound out a bit more...
PEACE from the pea
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20-09-2005 09:56 |
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anf0 D
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Darkside
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like the metallic snare. kick is too distorted, fix that quick.
i agree with greyone about the velocity of the ghosts.
besides bein badly eq'ed and stuff, your beat rides pretty well.
the flangers being audible is not really fun, i've always hated that shit.
that sudden beat drop with all the lil pangs and twangs that you put in every once in a while sounds so dry, i don't like it.
this is really unclear, and its a shame...mainly the bass frequencies distorting each other out.
add some bright reverb to the elements of your beat that would benefit from hi end. but only very little. im tellin you guys, this works and its tight.
this song sounds so empty. fill out the frequencies with some better atmos than the ones you've got.
ok dude, this really has potential, but its a bad mixdown right now. the sounds aren't eq'ed freshly...i think maybe you just need to practice eqing for a while. i wish i could jus grab ur setup and show you how to make those drum samples sound good...as well as the lead bass.
6/10
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21-09-2005 02:06 |
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anf0 D
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yeah i wish someone could help me master my tunes on my computer only using orion pro... see if they can get a better sound then me.
there are some EQ problems... and i did go soft on the high freqs, and yeah i like the distorted kick... just needs to be mixd down well and this would sound fine i errections. and i tone down the ghost snares for u cryn bitchs.
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21-09-2005 02:27 |
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Darkside
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if i used orion pro i would so do it man.
anyone who wants me to dope up their beats in fruity, i can.
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21-09-2005 02:54 |
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anf0 D
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yeah i could get a nice sound out of FL but my comp is too slow to be using that. but my gf sister just got a new comp... so i might chuck FL on there, for when im bored at their house.
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21-09-2005 02:57 |
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equipped
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Heafty soundin track man...dark, aggresive, punchy producin all the way threw..maybe take what's starts at >6:35 pull drum's out and put it somewhere in the middle of the track for a few bar's,..that bass sound's really phat rollin along on its own..Sick tune man...cheer's...
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21-09-2005 02:59 |
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anf0 D
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yeah cool man... i was thinking about that... because i like the sub n drums by themselves also... could prolly add some subage at the intro.
cheers for ze review mate.
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21-09-2005 03:05 |
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optikal_assassin
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what it is bro? this ones got the anf0 D style stamped all on it. Ok, lets go with the intro first, nice way to start shit off. as a personal taste if you's gonna start off with the beats off the bat like that, i'd like to hear some thicker snares to kinda compliment the heavy distorted bass drum. whats that clicking sound starting around 1:07? is that intentional or a glitch? i cant 100% tell. i think when the beats dropped out around 1:07, i would've gradually faded everything out completely, then came in with a swift and hard vocal stab or something to maybe put mor eimpact on the drop. it just kinda glided right in to the drop which stole the feel of the drop a bit. i would say if you's gonna use a heavy ass kick drum like that, maybe cut the freq's off somewhere around the sub frequencies to give your basslines more breathing room. sounde dlike your basslines and kick subs were battling it out for space. yeah, ok, eq'ing could use some cosmetic work. structuring seems pretty solid for the most part. yah maybe you coulda shoved back that spot around the 6:35 as equipped said. also, what i think would help things shine is maybe toning down some of the heavier freq's to make more room for additional sounds so shit aint conflicting. im not sure what kinda other sounds could have worked, that'd be all experimentation, but i think it could use more to keep it busier and give the whole overall sound more impact. all in all man, it needs work in some areas, and i know you've done better, but if you's happy with it, that to me is whats the most important. keep it rockin' bro and keep dem choons turnin'...
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21-09-2005 03:29 |
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anf0 D
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cheers bruz...
ill continue working it... didnt spend alot of time on it.
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21-09-2005 03:37 |
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optikal_assassin
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no sweat bro, i know you's got some bad ass potential, so the flaws are easily overlooked. just waiting for the massive storm to drop from ya.
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21-09-2005 03:39 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Lovin the dark intro as usual. Is orion cool? Never got the chance to see it. That distorted bass is fuckin wicked!!!!!Drums are very nice. Yeah I would totally play this track. No complaints here.
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21-09-2005 05:00 |
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anf0 D
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cool thanx man
ive updated and uploaded it to my sound click page here
cheers bruzzez and cuzzez
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21-09-2005 07:08 |
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anf0 D
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some mad cunt with skills wanna check out the new version for us n tell us how it goes down...
cheers my children
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23-09-2005 04:35 |
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Nick ZZ
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We had to join at sound click, we just joined as a listener, like your track pictures...
-Nice intro
-Drums sound good
-love the distorted synth alot
-cymbals sound good
-That FX synth, the one that sounds human is sick.
10/10
Z
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anf0 D
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Nick ZZ
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26-09-2005 11:53 |
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drdoombrain
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Iv been lerking and listing to a few tracks on here recently and this one is my fave at the mo, like the chop socky beats as im into dark distortions
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