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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Superior Machine' and post your comments here!!!
distorted hardcore kicks and drumnbasses combined with some sci-fi ambient.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-09-2005 17:58 |
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extron
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well.. 13 seconds in and im already hooked. evol and rowdy, gotta love it. love the samples and the distortion on the kick and synth. there are a lot of drums coming at me during the intro and drop. maybe take them down a notch and sorta mix them in with the bass and synth a little more. all in all i really like it, very unique sounding, and structuring. i would give it a 5-6 on my scale.
-rKe
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19-09-2005 19:23 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by greyone
distorted hardcore kicks and drumnbasses combined with some sci-fi ambient. |
explains it well.
you got a catchiness here with the sinister and ultra-heavy bassline. the beats weigh a thousand tons too, nice balance. I think you can do much more with that snare though, its kinda muffled, undefined.
some nice touches around 3:00-3:20 drop. I like the way those drums went off, the little sounds and spoken bit. but you drop it back too fast, maybe building some more anticipation would work better
ah, I see the exaggeration, the drums? hardcore stomping madness
not exactly my cup od tea, think it would work better with some less amenish drums, something maybe more sci fi. oh man why you dont use reason, I would love to remix this shit
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19-09-2005 20:22 |
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anf0 D
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intro sounds are sweeet... ambient sounds are cool. nice work on the intro sounds indeed.
u is gettin pro bro
somethings u can tell they are sample though, but its not too obvious.
drums are heavy fuckers... cant hear bass that much... not rumbling... oh "here comes the bass" evil fuker riff...
nice reece... i dont like it how it takes a while for the bass to drop.
drums are very cool though.
nice use of effects n shit.
when it gets into full swing of things its very heavy n distorted .... nice shit. fuckin good sound also... cunts would be going mental to this on the dancefloor. finish it off bruz... good shit.
should have FL5 runnin on my system soon, so we should get into something if ur interested. i know i am 
peace - 8/10 because i dont like the teasing drops... u should just build it and drop the bass XD
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20-09-2005 05:01 |
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PEAHEAD
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alrite grey1. i kno this is goin to be good b4 i hav even herd it. i like ur style...
real nice atmosphere... them hard kicks work well. ohhh them vocals are nice man.the drop is quite nice asdwel. sick drums man propa ruff. i recon tht that melody part which starts at 1.02 could do with bein a little lower and itz mabye getin a little anoyin now but them hard kicks reali make this track stand out. good work grey 1 not one of your best ive herd but stil nice mabye check your levels again...
PEACE...from the pea
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20-09-2005 09:45 |
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Greyone
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thanx for checking out my weird track .
my skills upgraded again
oK IT seems you guys like the intro , i'll stick to that .
the drop was to exagerated i kno , but ... some boneheads will knock their heads on it 
i just love distortion and phat basses... and cutting (i kinda forgot to do it now)
bussy with my next track now , much much much better and cuttttt-t-t-ted 
now i'll gather some more samples and make it a 'gimme-a-label' record .
Seeya
-6R3Y0N3-
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20-09-2005 11:58 |
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optikal_assassin
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Damn, right on man, now this is what I'm talkin' bout. You came in proper with this one. I think to date this is prolly the best I've heard out your corner. Real good shit man. ZZ man made a good point tho, you did them voc samples well, the FL robot vox aint that bad if done to the point you can't really tell it's FL, but these ones sound much better. Heavy breaks and tearin' bassline biz. Yeah snare could have had a bit more impact, but nothin' major. Everything sounds pretty good, now I'd like to see you keep goin' like this and make your next one even more evil. Just keep away from the silly sounds and do more shit like this man and you'll be cookin' hardcore. Big upz bro, got a 9/10 from me. 
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21-09-2005 02:17 |
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Nosrac
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Wicked intro - great build, awesome voices. Man a lot has changed since the last time I checked your tracks! Although the intro is kickass the beat that comes in is too fragmented, I see what you're going for with the evol style but you need two kits going, one that punches (like this one) and one that slaps and rolls. The synth stabs are bit two obvious though - nicely panned but need a touch of reverb to space it out from the mix. The bass is nice and heavy, a bit fuzzy but full. The track mix is nice and bright and full, but maybe a bit too full, your ceiling is maxed right out. The intro (with the big dancehall beat), the middle and the end are superb however, and if you get a back and forth structure going to this one the whole track would be ripping as well. keep up the good work!
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21-09-2005 02:18 |
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optikal_assassin
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Originally posted by Nosrac
Man a lot has changed since the last time I checked your tracks! |
yeah, mos def man, you're improvin' that style. maybe i should have pointed out some things that COULD be better, but I guess I'll let the rest speak for me. By the way, I did forget to mention maybe the bassline could use a little more sub pushin'. seemed you had alot of higher frequencies but the lower end wasn't pushin' as hard as it could have. just had to really hear this out again. Sorry for the premature post before, just kinda tired and should've thought a bit more before I jumped to post. Still a good track tho.
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21-09-2005 02:23 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Cool feel to it. I like the intro a lot. Whoa that's pretty cool. Some nice samples. Look out future here comes the mighty Greyone!The drums remind me of the Exhile remix of broken laguage. Man it almost feels industrial pretty wicked
Later
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21-09-2005 21:08 |
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baz
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nigga this shit's great
talkin' bout some originallity here 
? nice fuckin' work
this is the kind of track many people can appreciate only trough it's diversity
man i really could just go on bullshitting like this but i'm not gonna
well deserved 10/10 ma man nice work
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22-09-2005 16:20 |
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dj_prophecy
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holy shit, gotta love this track! The intro is what I like best about the whole track, it's just awes0me. I like your drums a lot! You have improved a lot since your last track.
This track belongs with a resident evil like movie
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24-09-2005 20:32 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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29-09-2005 00:39 |
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wreakon
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nice!!!
heaps of energy.. cools synth and drum work
man at 1:30 i thought it was building up to the biggest drop ever 
but that was kinda the peak 
disappointed but its still a solid tune
i would be cool if it switched from that jerky to a rolling stlye occasionally
4.5/5
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29-09-2005 17:30 |
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this track has some cool evil energy to it- a little space would go a long way on this one- let some individual accents stand out more.
You definitely got the machine vibe going.
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05-10-2005 16:47 |
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thefunke1
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Wow, this is one stopming hard hitting ass track... ahh a little room to breath at 1:55. Nice track, great sounds but needs to have a little something more, gets repetative. Like the ambience towads the end.
Very hard hitting tune.
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10-10-2005 00:58 |
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Rudeone
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