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M.O.A.B. 
Producer
Registration Date: 22-04-2003
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I made this track about a year ago,
any comments are much appreciated
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09-07-2003 01:51 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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hmmm...where is the track????
cheerz..
*waiting for dour* 
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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09-07-2003 20:38 |
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CH3M!K
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 19-01-2003
Posts: 127
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nice track, i'd put some variation in the ghost hits, some volume changes and stuff. The beat needs more underlying breaks too imo. Otherwise: good stuff 
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09-07-2003 20:59 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Originally posted by Airfull
hmmm...where is the track???? |
In the listensection eufkeurs 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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09-07-2003 21:33 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Drums sound a bit lo-fi
Nice switching between stabs n shit
Feels like you're building up for a climax which never comes tho.
Try adding more variation to the drums than just adding and removing hats n rides
Also, keeping the stab thing going virtually unchanged during the whole track gets boring after a few minutes
So, nice ideas but needs lots of beefing up
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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10-07-2003 12:47 |
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