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Victom#1 
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Registration Date: 26-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Bird of Paradise' and post your comments here!!!
Woot for the first thing ive written in months.
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19-09-2005 03:50 |
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wreakon
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intro is kinda boring 
The first breakdown sounds like a new tune.. try have a consistant theme throughout
generaly it sounds empty and padded out and you need to do some eqing badly!
not too bad after the drop though.. nice piano and bass! levels are good
good effort! 
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19-09-2005 04:18 |
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PEAHEAD
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Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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yeah the intro is kinda boring. mabye that piano could be a bit deeper or somthing. oh ity has gone deeper..
chil out track reali ent it. not reali my style but good work
PEACE
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19-09-2005 09:37 |
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Greyone
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synths are too digital and samplish if you know what i mean.
that synth gets really enoying.
Dnb drums sounds nice but could use some layering imo , or add some more high vintage stuff.
piano fucks it up big time.
im sory to be that harsh but i can't really tell much good about it.
the worst is that fading synth all the time.
i heard better ones of you before , keep it up.
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19-09-2005 12:05 |
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Greyone
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hindsight (this one sounded digital too , but then i thougt you would go for techstep)
Are you working with FL ?
FL is as digital as a synthesiser but you can do wonderfull things with it when trowing in some analogue samples.
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20-09-2005 09:17 |
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Victom#1
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20-09-2005 09:36 |
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zebediah
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This is deep! It reminds me of something but I just can't put my finger on it. The melodies are really well thought out and mature sounding.
The beat programming is genius the way the beats play around. They sound clean and move along nicely.
Bass is sick!
It doesn't sound finished. Just make everything a bit brighter and sprinkle it with some FX and u got yourself a really nice song here.
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20-09-2005 10:59 |
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anf0 D
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the intro is kind of boring but its not a bad thing i think, its just minimal, n minimal is good, it builds anticipation.
the little piano riff thing before the drop is cool... the drop is alright, could probably do with some cool hats n cymbals n maybe extra percussion... there is some there, but cant really hear it that well, maybe eq it abit stronger. the sub is nice... nice riff.
stays abit samey... could probably build the piano thing abit.. .change the notation maybe... to a more xciting one of corse... to build it.
and the break loop is cool also, i like it. n the atmo pads are fine too.
cool tune but not too xciting for a person with fuck all attention span
7.5/10
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21-09-2005 01:17 |
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S.O.T.A.
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What's up haven't heard one from you in a while. Intro is kind of plain drums sound good. You should have left the broken beat in with the 2 step beat. Just till the drop I don't know just me. The keys kind of sound cheap you should effect them more. Eh not really my thing but not bad. It's kind of jazzy huh? Needs more excitment
well till next time
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21-09-2005 21:03 |
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djgrim
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Registration Date: 06-02-2008
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the beat sounds out and abit to simple im not feelin it.
once you sort the beat out it would sound alot better.safe and respect
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09-02-2008 22:38 |
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