anf0 D 
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Please check out my new track '10111011' and post your comments here!!!
heavy rolling tekky steppy stuff.
i know what it needs. what do you guys think it needs.
all done in orion pro.
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Surora23
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i think that intro synth should be half the volume...and the hats are way too loud as well... drops... boring...sorry the bass isnt exciting... and for what it is, deff not used the way it prolly should be...
and the breaks make no sense...like whats up with the snare roll in the middle of the break? maybe you just didnt add dynamics to the ghost snares..or something or were just trying something different...i dunno...whatever it was...it doesnt work...
i dunno man...i cant really say much for this...sorry...i would comment more but i have nothing positive to say...so ill leave it as objective as i can..youve made better than this...so scrap this and start over..
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13-09-2005 03:47 |
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Darkside
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why not just call the track "binary"?
synth in the intro is way too loud. get something else.
good job filtering it out. brings relief to me.
bassline is kinda generic. needs freshening, and a lil more growl. i want it to be mad at me. i want it to tell me i've been bad. oh, hit me harder.
make the snares you used for the drumrolling parts in between have less release on em. kind of hard to differentiate between them and the main snares some times. they're hitting like an automatic weapon and just as hard as the ones that are supposed to drive the beat.
getting really boring...play the beat, play the bass, pitch up the beat, repeat, is all im hearing.
think this whole thing could use more bass, beat doesnt catch me as nice and punchy as all.
take this one back to the mid-stages of the production, and add more sounds, and make em sound better, and fit.
6/10
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Surora23
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Originally posted by anf0 D
ahhh my two badd ass crytiks.
and why not just call it binary u say.... because i didnt want to. i want ppl to find out what the binary code is.
well you guys havent said anything that would help me fix it... just your own personal opinions on the sounds...
you guys should know by now that im not one for making full on xciting tracks... i try n keep it original. |
fun exciting tracks...doesnt meant "un original" you want to keep your tracks original but still sound good...and in all honesty youve made MUCH better than this...and with that, why move backward, but forward...theres nothing to say to make thsi better cassue you cant make this idea good IMO...now again theyre opinions...but if youve made better, then why concentrate on thsi specific idea? to be original? you can still have a great track andbe original...
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13-09-2005 06:10 |
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anf0 D
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i was saying fun xciting tracks arnt unoriginal...
but other then that id say ur right...
there was no idea in the first place...
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13-09-2005 08:09 |
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muphasta
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killer intro but the main thing this needs is eq and a few limiters or compressors. the beats are a bit too mechanical sounding too imho. hats too weak comparing the rest. i like the basses but like said before equalize. maybe try and make a core edit out of this one. if you decide to do so post me a link where i cann find it or e-mail it to me. else i wanna give it a try core-wise!!!!
eq this and use some more gosths and variating snare's and kicks. the high synth u use at the end is good but way too background.
5/10
for now
cheers
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13-09-2005 18:11 |
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Greyone
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13-09-2005 18:11 |
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Greyone
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I'd like to do a remix (Greyone mix )
or a collaboration ( Anf0 ft. Greyone ) 
Gather yo powerz Anf0 , you've got the skills !
let me know sumthing.
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13-09-2005 19:45 |
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PEAHEAD
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sounds like a good track to me mabye it needs a but more variation of bass. it jus goes on and on no offence.
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13-09-2005 23:58 |
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Nick ZZ
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Like the intro. If you boost the mids and cut the lows on that bass/synth it might sound a little better, I don't know, just an idea. I don't dislike it, I just think it needs some more activity or messen around with. The snare in the snare roll stands out in an odd way. Just sounds a little too much like a Korg or Yamaha synth sound, and gets a bit repetative. Keep at it. Z
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14-09-2005 01:01 |
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optikal_assassin
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yeah bro, intro was startin' to sound good then the bomb missed course when it dropped. i know how it can be a bitch writing tracks when you feel lazy and uninspired, it's a fuckin' weekly routine for me. then poof, somethin' in my head sets off to write something half descent. everything seems like it would be ok, but could use more serious variations, which you obviously know. you didn't seem to bring any new ideas into the track but dropped with a handful of ideas and kept lettin' them go over and over the whole time. not extremely bad, but ive heard you drop deadlier. maybe some other shit to fill it out mor ein the background, some voc stabs or pads, you know. spin some records man and let the mind gather itself for a bit, trust me, it'll come to you when it's right.
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14-09-2005 01:48 |
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anf0 D
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hehe this is def the best producers community for dnb id say...
you guys are mad... thanx for the comments... yeah i know what u guys are saying lol... its like i mad half of it... and then thought bah fuck it, ill just lay it out again. lol
ok its time for a mad idea.... off to the bong smoking hut!!!
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14-09-2005 05:18 |
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auralchaos
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I think it is a really nice noisy track for the more hardcore dnb steppers (the ones that run a distortion box throughout their whole DJ mix of dnb and gabba). I don't really like the intro/outro synth that much...but I am also not much for synths at all.
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16-09-2005 16:02 |
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stickbubbly
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i think this track could use a deeper kick.
i like the lead but it needs more layers
the drums would sound nice with more cymbals. especially a crash.
and i think some background fx would really fill things up more.
there are some really good ideas in the track so far.
nice one.
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18-09-2005 03:43 |
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Where's the feel? Kinda sounds like a buncha cut and paste with a little filtering. 
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05-10-2005 17:01 |
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anf0 D
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06-10-2005 00:38 |
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Fx works are improved !
... sometimes)
me and my 'cutting' allways 
