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Please check out my new track 'Juice (unfinished preview)' and post your comments here!!!
just some laid back vibes.....nothin to serious.....basically the inrto, break, drop and a second breakdown.....just gives you an idea where its goin (if i ever finish it).....let me know what ya think....might be a little quiet..
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12-09-2005 05:07 |
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DJ-ABOMINABLE 
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Sounds Good and Clean want to hear the Finished version 
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12-09-2005 10:34 |
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Muad'Dib
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Let's review a tune of my friend Munki C... 
Wow, great break you have there, juz like from a real drummer... maybe the snare is too quiet, try adding a bit on its power. The atmo is gr8
I like this a lot. Great melodies and sounds... whoha... laid back, yeah... The voice says all the right things, respect!
The bass is great, but maybe too sub.. I fancy a bit more distorted basses... anyway, the kick is juz like "poop" sound, there is no "boom" beneath... no power, no heaviness... this is kick just to be heard, not to have some part in the tune... try to fix that.
Great atmo dude. You have quite a story there, and those sounds of some guitar/piano instrument juz drive me nuts
Ends much sooner than I expected... hmm..yeah, 3:14 too short, friend. Try adding a melody or synth more, and prolong it for about 1 minute... that should do it, yeah.
Soundwise: the drums are GREAT! I mean, everything is clear and they have punch (except maybe the kick in the second part of the tune, where it lacks power). The hats are great, but the second layer of them can't be heard nice... try setting it to be louder.
The guitar/piano sound/intrument should be a bit quiter.. only a bit!! Nah, it's ok...
7,5/10
Peace dude,
Muad'Dib
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12-09-2005 14:23 |
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yeh cheers muaddib......the reason its so short is because its not finished yet 
.....its something i started a while back but like so many tunes i got bored with it....and yeh one of the layers is a real drummer.......something i recorded a while back...
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12-09-2005 14:32 |
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Muad'Dib
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Originally posted by MUNKI C
.and yeh one of the layers is a real drummer....... |
I knew it
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12-09-2005 14:39 |
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Dig your ideas,..lot's of deep soundin stuff goin down..yeah Muad'ib put it into good words about the kick..maybe carry only the bass and drums for a bit and do some crazy wobblin..this made me think of a brisk winters day,..deep shit Munki..
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12-09-2005 18:11 |
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yeah nice laid back trak man. sounds nice so far i would like to hear the finished product
PEACE
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12-09-2005 19:00 |
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What's up I like the drums in the intro. I like the heavier beat comin in and the pads are nice too.Nice it's got a c4c feel to it. Maybe that hostile label? It's got a nice feel to it. Sample is kind of cool. Chill tune.
Later
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14-09-2005 04:26 |
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Nick ZZ
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Where you find the drummer? Nah, good drums man. Like the kick layers. Great job on EQ, what EQ you using? Dig the vocal sample and that bass line is def nice. The levels sound right.
You having trouble on the intro? I think if you use that vocal sample in a twisted way with the rhodes mellody and build it in to the break that would be nice. I will listen to it once again when you finish. I like this one so far, feelen it. Z
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14-09-2005 11:30 |
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auralchaos
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I like the dark mellow feel, although it was a bit on the short side 3:14 but you said it was unfinished...so I'll wait for the rest. I like the voice samples they say just what all of us truelly want for this world. You could maybe put a really long rain stick or shimmery cymbol at the end and transition to a new part with some of the first things remixed with added drums... That live drummer thing in the beginning is really cool too. Nice track.
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16-09-2005 16:23 |
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Surya
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Very nice track!
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