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davieb1 
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Registration Date: 04-08-2005
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Please check out my new track 'humpty' and post your comments here!!!
new ideas for a track ignore the intro tis shite would like input on main riff please. dave
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08-09-2005 14:19 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Nice synth that drop's at>1:22,... Synth that drops at>00:58,..could do with some mad filtering...I must say man,..main riff sound's really tight... Maybe throw it all threw a sampler and apply a massive filter sweep with that riff,..later in the track once you get thing's close to complete... It would sound really sick on that riff IMO..Overall sound quality is rough,.. probably the mp3 conversion..Anyway this be some tight producin Davieb1!! Me dig..Cheers. 
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08-09-2005 19:59 |
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Invent
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Registration Date: 03-09-2005
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i like your beggining sounding funky... wierd reverbed thingys in the background are trippy... one or two beeps in there have a really high frequency tho which kinda irritated my ears... your drop is cool... i like the electro bass you used... reminds me of a electroclash party lol... loads of arps making it quite interesting... cool layering... it sounds like a full mix.... but i think your bass drum is kinda hiding out somewhere... can hardly hear that... maybe turn up the drums?
and in the beggingin a more exstatic drop?
for the rest i think this tune is worth working out...
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08-09-2005 20:04 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Shame that "shite" intro cannot be reviewed because it is absolutely wonderfull... 
Fantastic beats, creative sounds, squealy acieed lead sound is good, but I like also how other melodies work behind the main melod to add up. Some more energy to beats? Also cannot feel your bassline yet, boost some from 60-80Hz?
Definately a good start
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10-09-2005 21:17 |
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muphasta
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10-09-2005 23:18 |
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xplosion
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Registration Date: 10-09-2005
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ok, the intro isn't soo good, but after that, wow. Especially at 1:22, then it all sounds like I want to dance. Good filtered sweep effec like at 1:41. And the drums, maybe a little bit more variation ? But that's not so difficult since the drums you're using sound very nice ! One tip maybe, you should build an ending too, it's too sudden now.
Keep on going !!
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12-09-2005 00:20 |
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