drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » DjSlut - Sneer DjSlut - Sneer Author Post DjSlut Cool Producer Registration Date: 27-08-2003 Posts: 160 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Sneer ' and post your comments here!!! __ VAS 07-09-2005 20:59 Invent Cool Producer Registration Date: 03-09-2005 Posts: 179 Helpfulness rating:  im not really into the wierd beeping noizes in the background... perhaps some reverb on those to make them more chilled out sounding... your drums have to be worked on... your choice of samples is kinda dry sounding... i need some more percussion... percussion with reverb can make a rhythm stand out much more. you can always equalize the percussion to make it sound more like its there... and adjust some volume levels and all... at 2:00 comes an interesting part where you let the bass in... doesnt sound bad... kinda like it... however i think a breakdown with many kicks repeated and snares after eachother to an orgasm of a bunch of sounds would do the track much more good in its buildup... the arp is also interesting... but try to put a bit more variation by adding different sounds once in a while... or to make it sound fuller you can always overlap the synths your using that also creates a kick ass sound if you equalize these correctly... overal interesting track.. but nothing special... greetings 07-09-2005 22:43 PEAHEAD Wicked Producer Registration Date: 27-07-2005 Posts: 416 Helpfulness rating:  wel i feel like im playin duke nukem or sumfin. no offence... um wel itz quite empty not realy my choise of drums im into the ruffer stuff. wel the bass at bout 2mins sounds alrite. the drop after that is quite good. i suopse this track is alrite once it kicks in. but stil feels computerey if u kno what i mean. it needs to have a fuller sound mabye add some elements like a harder drum kick. some metalic snares in there ghost snares and u will be off. PEACE 08-09-2005 00:59 davieb1 Producer Registration Date: 04-08-2005 Posts: 28 dont like that bass sound in the intro sounds too preset like, like your choice of drum sound but theres not enough life in them need more variation in your programing and maybe sum kind of filter or something to make them jump about a bit more. after the drop maybe a bit of distortion on the drum because they sond a bit weak in the mix. like you synth sound but need riff with more of a bounce to it. so what i would do is, alter drum, change bass sound at start, try and make the intro more atmospheric n all with some nice pads floating about the place. then after the drop a new riff and try n get some more power into those drum, wat synth did you use? keep up the good work mate, dave 08-09-2005 14:33 muphasta Master Producer Registration Date: 29-06-2004 Posts: 643 Helpfulness rating:  intro is quite good, bass dropping in s nice but needs adjustments in eq. wah sound is nice. second bass way too back ground. ad some amens or breaks like that for fullness. some off the sounds are way too off leveled. on the other hand you some nice ideas and variations in it . 6/10 cheers __ muphasta none dnb www.myspace.com/muphsugar reggeadubwise.com Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa muphsteppa@reggeadubwise 10-09-2005 23:24 stickbubbly mad man Registration Date: 16-09-2004 Posts: 377 Helpfulness rating:  didnt like the intro, but once the song kicks in it sounds much better. really cool melody. lead sounds deadly more sub would be nice. kick seems a bit light. cool track. cheers. 18-09-2005 16:37 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » DjSlut - Sneer