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PEAHEAD
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Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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Please check out my new track 'inspration' and post your comments here!!!
wel i started makin this track and kinda thaught it wernt goin no where but then i listened to it the otha today and thaught it could. does ne1 hav ne ideas for it. i need to perfect my settings on it for now. im usin fruity 5producer ne1 if that helps... im quite new in the game but i am a fast learner
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07-09-2005 10:14 |
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Invent 
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Registration Date: 03-09-2005
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i dont know too much about fruity... but i can already tell you that you need to put in a lot of work to really make this track work.. first off... your bassline is nothing special in the beggining, its kindof annoying... you could try putting on some various effects from fruity... slight distortion... equalizing to get a better sound... and then take out the low frequencies and put over a sub bass to get a fuller... better sound. the second part where you put in that sub bass is already slightly better however your track still feels really empting... perhaps by putting a couple of snare hits over eachother might make those sound more like they are there... also putting some hihats over eachother... and try to get a really nice rhythm from these hihats so you could almost swear your track sounds faster... (but without ofcourse putting up the bpm)...
anyway... keep working on it.. and read up a lot...
greetings
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07-09-2005 22:50 |
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short-wave
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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this tune is needs some other elements. the subs bottomed out my speakers. use more edits like near the end. don't be afraid to change up the bassline. stretch out the notes that are there. do a reverse of the bassline near the end of a 16 bar count then maybe a different drum roll at the following 16. i think the heart of the tune is here. there doesn't seem to be much of an intro. just use drums and atmosphere at the start. maybe some of those cool drum edits as well. introduce the tune, but don't spoil the surprise of the drop. there seemed to be more cool elements towards the end of the tune. i would put more of the sounds into the start. the bass is way to heavy on my monitors. this is rough, could take some time to put it straight. do you have a turntable? try to "stencil" out a track that you already really like( make it easy and use a very popular tune that is out on vinyl by the thousands!) every time you hear a new element come in on the record, find one in your sample library that you want to use and slowly build the track one layer at a time. i learned most of my programing by listening to pressed music. i dj'd for more then 4 years b4 i ever started to build. it was the best thing for me...maybe give it a try...
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07-09-2005 23:05 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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This remind's me of one of my old track's. Synth's that drop at>00:30 could certianly do with some bass. Maybe also apply some filter'sand try fucking with the eq.. Some sick editing on the drum's at>1:47! That's some funky shit at>1:30, plucking synth in the background add's nicley to the mayham. Phat bass at>1:53, more of this in the track would beef thing's up imo. Track get a bit repetative, >1:47 (the sick drum's)is the way to go, pure phatness!!! Eye It's ne bad son, 
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07-09-2005 23:27 |
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PEAHEAD
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Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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yeah thanx for the reviews. i will hav a go a tht makin a tune by listnin to another.. thanx for the tips
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08-09-2005 00:24 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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Drums R wicked ! Basses are too digital imo , trow away that junglist.vst and get some massive bass samples 
Drums are a huge improvement , Pump them volume up ! (Fruity blood overdrive - Amp buttn a bit more - or Compressor - Gain button a bit more -)
Work on your structure :
Intro : Don't drop drums n reeces n basses n stuff on the first 40 sec. build it up slightly (use atmosphere sounds and build up with slightly tickeling drumhits , fx stuff , buildup with kicks etc...)
Drop : Allways begin with this one , and pracktice practice practice till yo drop is good enough (takes a lot of time , believe me )
breakdown : fade the drums out , put the atmosphere back in , drop some (non copyrighted , or disguised ) vocals in and stuff and buildup again.
Outro : don't foget this one.
/ Lot of work for you peehead /
Greetz
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08-09-2005 17:03 |
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