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teknyne 
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Please check out my new track 'jealous motherf*ckerz (50% complete, volume sorted)' and post your comments here!!!
its come to my attention that when i exported the mp3 of this tune from cubase that i had the volume in cubase turned right down. oops, here's a more audible mp3 4 you's
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06-09-2005 17:04 |
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09-09-2005 04:49 |
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your drums are pretty cool... sound really raw 
but somehow i think they arent too full sounding... maybe too much high frequency... i dont know...... i think the background sounds are alright... im not really into the atmosphere thats in but then after 1 minute your awesome buildup starts... i like the messing you did with frequencies.... however... i like to be tricked with buildups... maybe like have people expecting a drop at that point and do some crazy shit after that... i like your drum patterns sound interesting... however a bit harder bass drum might be in place... dont find that the combination of that softer one with the 'hardcore' bassdrum is too great. i see you did some breakcore at around 3 minutes... quite cool sequencing... but afterwards i think the song goes back into style too fast... your switch up is too suddenly.. overall i think its a really cool track so far... with some cool potential...
would like to hear that one completed...
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09-09-2005 13:49 |
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wTrouble
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ok, here's my 2 cents worth...
intro is nice, quite s-p-o-o-k-y 
not too sure about the some of the volume drops in the breakdown, maybe try and keep some of the elements up there so there's always something going on, no matter how sparse.
The drop comes a little too smoothly, almost unexpectantly if you hadn't been counting bars - maybe bring the sample forward so it finishes before the drop, add some delays on the last 'down' and add perhaps a dillinja style kick-kick-kick-cRakc! that sits in time with the delayed 'down's.
After the drop, things seem to lack a bit of drive, maybe have a look at the eqs to try and bring things a bit more up in your face.
I like the change to the half time stuff (I think people who are familiar with sub-genralism call it breakcore??? 
) but given this is incomplete I'm not sure how you are using it - would it be for the second breakdown? if so, like it... As to it being within the main flow between the two breakdowns I'm not sure - you may want to bring it back before the break just to get people pack up at 11 before giving it the tease with the breakdown. Only thing I'd say is during this down tempo bit try and make the subs big and bold to keep people moving.
Also, with such a strong sample, maybe use some of those drum techniques and get some cut up vocal action on the go.
Ok - input finished. Sounding good Mr Technical Nine - I like the sample, and I like the idea. Liking the drum programming too matey. Get the second breakdown and the last two minutes done and I'll be back for a listen 4 sure.
Nice mate 
wT
This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by wTrouble: 09-09-2005 16:23.
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09-09-2005 16:10 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by equipped
Just smoked a fat one,..anyway,. Teknyne-jealous motherf*ckerz, volume sorted verson!!!!!!..This sounds fucking tight man!!Synth at the intro start's off soundin a bit rough imo,..but once the vocal's come in it's fucking brilliant!...Maybe slap a phaser on them synths..That's some serious mashin on the vocal's at>3:09 on..How you do that??
,,,Sick change up at>2:50 
Spot on choppin man>3:01
!!!!!!!!More cymblz all over the place would add to the drums imo..And maybe fuck around with some unison on that synth 
just discovered the unison thing,..work's really well with that type of sound!!..Some seriously phat producing Teknyne... Your track's are allway's insane!! 
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haha biggup mate
to mash the vocal up i just chucked it into recycle chopped it, exported a rex file then wacked the rex in my sampler and went crazy.
thanx to evry1 4 their comments appreciate it. gonna hit u's all soon with a finished(ish) version. peace
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09-09-2005 16:33 |
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teknyne
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| And maybe fuck around with some unison on that synth just discovered the unison thing,..work's really well with that type of sound!!.. |
whats that then? sounds interesting
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09-09-2005 18:14 |
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equipped
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Originally posted by teknyne
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| And maybe fuck around with some unison on that synth just discovered the unison thing,..work's really well with that type of sound!!.. |
whats that then? sounds interesting |
I don't know exactly but it sort of stack's up the sound and can be detuned to make it more phat,..sound's somewhat like a detuned oscillator..Oh and with that type of sound use a sawtooth wave
and fuck around with the LFO.....unison should be a feature available on all analouge synth's,..the version i use ain't a knob,.. though it could be on other synth's i guess,..detuning was in the program editor..cheers dude..
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09-09-2005 20:20 |
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This track has been deleted for copyright violation. It contained samples from a song by Notorious Big
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