 teknyne - jealous motherf*ckerz (50% complete) |
teknyne 
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Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'jealous motherf*ckerz (50% complete)' and post your comments here!!!
ez people. this one seems to be coming along now thought i'd get it up to try too catch any major problems early. peace
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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05-09-2005 15:25 |
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Darkside
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Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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wtf?????
why is this track so quiet?
fix that, dude...
the beat could use more energy and the humming sound is kinda weird.
pretty standard bassline eh?
vocal is very nice. well the fx on it make it sound cool anyway.
this track needs atmo, bigness, sounds so "computer music" right now. i dunno if you know what i mean.
beats are chopped nice, got some good ideas in here.
stuttered vocal is pretty cool.
you seem to have mad production skills, but stuff could sound a whole lot better..
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06-09-2005 02:32 |
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teknyne
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yea didnt notice volume till my m8 pointed it out. lol. i am a complete dufus. dont mind me.
will get a sorted version up in next coupla days so u can actually hear it lol. 
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06-09-2005 16:37 |
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teknyne
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version with volume sorted is posted now. please ignore this thread
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06-09-2005 17:05 |
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xplosion
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ok, I guess the negative comment is the most useful (although I really like the song):
the filtering from 1:28 is good, but the one before this, I would adjust because it doesn't flow with the ritm.
try to insert more structure
the voice sounds great, the drums in the beginning don't sound so good, but the variations after that are great, especially in combination with the synth bass.
great ! 
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13-09-2005 12:22 |
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