 Surora23 - Insight (into your mind dnb.be final)** |
Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Please check out my new track 'Insight (into your mind dnb.be final)**' and post your comments here!!!
The final version...I basically just did a lil more mastering, enough to put on the site, but the damn thing still needs some hella work... Im gonna take a break for a while...but enjoy...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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04-09-2005 17:48 |
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PEAHEAD
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yeah nice. ohh tht screechin noise. ive used that b4. good noise. i think i took a little of the high pitch of it. i recon u could take a little of yours drums are good there are some nice elements in there it has a nice layout. the bass is nice. oh my god thats another noise ive used. that noise at3:40 i fink i am gona have to completley updaye my libary of samples. 
wel this tune is good man the melodys are good. if it didnt have them noises in it would have been even better. but thts jus cuz i herd em b4. wel keep it up man... thts some good shit.
PEACE 
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04-09-2005 23:19 |
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peet
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yeah you're doing good surorar, finally developing your own style, lots of switches and edits, i like that. just one thing. it needs more energy. listen to your music at low levels and make sure it screams JUST as much at that level. it has a lot to do with mixing your bassline and drums together well.
also, make it less distorted and TACKY. like make it more synthetic. if you do that it immediately becomes more easy to listen to. also get those drums a bit louder. and put the reverb off of that leadline!
keep working and putting the time in and you'll get where you wanna be easily. 
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04-09-2005 23:24 |
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peet
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btw the edits around 04:10 are very cool and original.
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04-09-2005 23:24 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by peet
btw the edits around 04:10 are very cool and original. |
cheers man...thanks for the revoews so far...keep em coming...
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05-09-2005 01:02 |
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yeh this is good..but it sounds very muddy when it drops......the lead could do with a bit more fizz to it.....
apart from that i cant criticise to much, its varied enough to keep me interested, the sound seems good, the only thing i dont like is the rave noise......for me its been over used in all types of dance music for a long time now.....
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05-09-2005 17:27 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by MUNKI C
yeh this is good..but it sounds very muddy when it drops......the lead could do with a bit more fizz to it.....
apart from that i cant criticise to much, its varied enough to keep me interested, the sound seems good, the only thing i dont like is the rave noise......for me its been over used in all types of dance music for a long time now..... |
cool man thanks for the review...
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05-09-2005 17:43 |
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Darkside
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i absolutely hate the kool is back break! 
gives me nightmares of the earlier days.
still usin them hoover samples...gonna have to get with you on that i guess, get you some more original shit. some of em are ok, but...weren't made for this track.
the flanger on that bass still messes with me. and imo that part doesn't sound empty enough. it just should, for a pregnant silence before the drop. pregnant with potential.
does have a couple of problems when it drops. can see you fixed the sub, basically. dynamics really seemed to be drowned from your crash sample.
the hoover sample at 3:20 or whatever is just awful. meant to tell you.
drop with just chopped breaks could use some more atmosphere, bigness, eh? i do like the chopping tho.
dude you're gonna have to give me that amen reverse sample. i love that shit. you know the one.
looked at what peet said and turned the volume down, i can clearly hear how muffled this track kind of is. but i bet you can fix it.
after 6 minutes the last bit sounds really tacked on.
i hope all my criticisms were sane and you can understand them...longest review i've written in a while. not much needs to be said anymore sometimes, i guess. hope all this helps tho. overall i like this. no dark, no trance, just fun.
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06-09-2005 02:26 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by Darkside
i absolutely hate the kool is back break!
gives me nightmares of the earlier days.
still usin them hoover samples...gonna have to get with you on that i guess, get you some more original shit. some of em are ok, but...weren't made for this track.
the flanger on that bass still messes with me. and imo that part doesn't sound empty enough. it just should, for a pregnant silence before the drop. pregnant with potential.
does have a couple of problems when it drops. can see you fixed the sub, basically. dynamics really seemed to be drowned from your crash sample.
the hoover sample at 3:20 or whatever is just awful. meant to tell you.
drop with just chopped breaks could use some more atmosphere, bigness, eh? i do like the chopping tho.
dude you're gonna have to give me that amen reverse sample. i love that shit. you know the one.
looked at what peet said and turned the volume down, i can clearly hear how muffled this track kind of is. but i bet you can fix it.
after 6 minutes the last bit sounds really tacked on.
i hope all my criticisms were sane and you can understand them...longest review i've written in a while. not much needs to be said anymore sometimes, i guess. hope all this helps tho. overall i like this. no dark, no trance, just fun. |
goodstuff man...thanks..
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06-09-2005 04:45 |
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Surora23
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any more takers?
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08-09-2005 18:37 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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yeah...me....
right...
grimey start i see... i love these kinda intros..
kick drum works well against metalic soundin breaks that don't get too repetative
familiar samples but well executed..
loads a rythym on offer to keep me tapping my foot, those samples have been killed by so many though..
nice breakdown - although not tooo keen on the phase effect over that synth imo..
great build up to the drop, lose the vocal imo, its not needed imo
good change ups different overall sound from previous offerings i've heard from you.
good structure and your choice of placement with those sounds allows the track not to sound to familiar in areas..
yeah def drop that 'crazy motherfucker' sample i think it takes away the raw essence of this roller..
beatz on the initial drop are fat and i'd love to 'ave 'em...lol...
yea man rolls out well, would sound good in the mix, very dj freindly
respect
G
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