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T.roll 
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Dangerous Job (vip)' and post your comments here!!!
Changelog:
Complete rewritten sub and bassline. Even other waveform.
Drums more tight.
A bit more mastering and mixdown.
Enjoy... Dunno about sub: At my soundsystem it sounds really solid (Maudio Delta44 + 2x Maudio Studiophile BX5). Maybe it shoud be louder, if so, tell me.
TODO:
Maybe improve or rearrange intro...
A bit more mixdown and mastering 
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03-09-2005 19:36 |
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D-Pitch
Danny Jenk D-Pitch
Registration Date: 24-07-2004
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like how u have built the atmo in the intro. interesting drums, voc is nice touch, modulation is good on the bass .producion is class , i just feel the sound needs lifting a bit , it mybe u have cut the eq's a bit for space in the mix but maybe a lil to much. synth at 4,45 is nice.
good track. 7/10
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03-09-2005 21:05 |
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BigFire
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Sub bass sounds nice and growl. Tight song. Doesnt seem to katch my attention for too long.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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04-09-2005 00:37 |
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DjSlut
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Registration Date: 27-08-2003
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I think u need to work on the hi hats at the beggining, too repetitive and too harsh imo. I really the synth/bass work. I think if you spent more time on it would improve a lot more.
Perhaps the snare doesnt sit that well with the rest of the drums. It sound too wooden all the way through. Maybe try giving it more swing..
I like you sub it works well.
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07-09-2005 20:43 |
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T.roll
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
Posts: 172
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Thanks all, tips noticed.
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08-09-2005 09:09 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice track, but it lacks punch and bass
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07-10-2005 10:17 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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here goes...
yeah nice start to this one, hi ha has alot of treble
synth is wicked though good contrast to the percussion
maybe more mid round here - 1:20
build up is interesting but leads to halftime beatz that dont fit imo
drop is good, most poeple would exploit some of ur elements to the max but here u are demonstrating control over your sound
chopped fill-in breaks are doing their job well
i more of a straight ahead beatz n bass from the drop so not feelin this as much.
good track but agree with other comments of it lacking punch
Nice effort t
Laterz
G 
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14-10-2005 04:44 |
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