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teknyne teknyne is a male

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Please check out my new track 'JEALOUS MOTHERFUCKAZ (SKETCHY PREVIEW)' and post your comments here!!!

EZ ALL, STARTED THIS ONE TODAY, CANT MAKE MY MIND UP ABOUT IT, HAD SERIOUS BLOCKAGE RECENTLY SCRAPPED ABOUT 3 TUNES IN THE EARLY STAGES. THIS IS THE 1ST ONE I RECKON IS EVEN SLIGHTLY WORTH CARRYIN ON WITH IVE DONE FOR A GOOD WHILE. SEE WOT U THINK

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01-09-2005 23:31

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Distorted effect on the vocal's was a bit much, actually it sound's like the good old ringmodulator? Sick choppin/editing on the drum's man! 1:57 is some cool shit. Dig the revers cymblz at the intro, super duper tight! Like the scary ghosty sound. Some mad ass filtering before the drop Rinse

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!! Not much to really bitch about other than the amount of dist on the vocal's. Dam good chooner man, keep at it. Bigup

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02-09-2005 00:45

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nice chopping on the drumz
nice synth too altough the levels at 1:17 and 1:20-->1:23
1:30 the shits allright again
nice vocal sample Bigup

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try adding a second break(or make one with samples) to the first part
second part seem ok but need variation at least every 32 steps then needs a steady beat to roll on
bassline would be welcome too
like it but it needs work (lot's of) 7/10

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02-09-2005 16:51

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damn man, got my ass all worked up thinking you was gonna split this shit open with a dangerous ass bassline. i was diggin' that into man, and the vocal sample mangling might not appeal to all but i think it sounded pretty tight as is. I don't really know how much in depth on criticism i can go since the shit don't really start kicking off til' about the point the shit ends. but im tellin' ya, i think this piece has got some serious potential to be a stormer, and if i were you, slap a heavy ass crazy bassline on it and let it roll. breaks sounded pretty good and complex too, good variations. i think that vocal clip you used helped build some good anticipation for the drop and the hihat work was pretty slick in the intro too. I always enjoy complex hihat work. all in all man, it's shapin' up to be something good and mos defo would like to see where you take it. Rinse

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02-09-2005 22:44

Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male

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Easy on the FX! Liked the intro for the most part. If you dropped a few agressive bass kicks in there it would be a bit more moving, you know; just to let people know you are not fucking around. The synth was good, but it could come up a bit and if you layered it with a low synth and eq the high off it might sound a little more massive. When you cut it there for a moment I was not felling that at all. Noo

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I like drums after the drop, but the drop needs some massive layers, if you layered the synth, that might be a good time. Keep at it, sounds like you are off to a decent start. Z

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