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anf0 D
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Please check out my new track 'Destructive Personality' and post your comments here!!!
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not fully finished... still got do an outro...
put this together during the day.
spent a few hrs on it.
heavy darkness as usual
i enjoy this one.
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30-08-2005 08:33 |
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Nick ZZ
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Like the intro, nice use of space, I really liked the empthy spots alot!!! Dig the synths alot! The drums are good. Nice ambient synths thrown in the breakdown, for the build if you added some FX type synths it would build better. 9/10*
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30-08-2005 08:55 |
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Surya
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Drop: cool drums!
The bassline sounds a bit... like shit though. Needs some serious reEQing! I think it could use some aditional distortion too
Not bad, but needs some work imo
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30-08-2005 10:39 |
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PEAHEAD
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nice empty soundin like somthings gona happen u kno what i mean. real nice drop the bass flaps a little on my speakers drums maby a little to loud. good work with em tho. there real good. what program u use for producin. u usin fruity. no offence but it seems like it goes on for ever with out actuly rinsin u kno what i mean. ohh here it goes nice drop again. cymbals could do with bein turned down a little of put some filtering on it. PEACE
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30-08-2005 11:30 |
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intro is sinister, except for the dodgy drum machine cymbals.....
some of the sounds dont seem to fit together well imo.....i cant quite put my finger on it.......
the lead/bass is heavy but is lacking low end and warmth.....
not really feeling this one dude...sorry.....its got a 98 feel about it...doesnt really keep me interested..
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30-08-2005 17:56 |
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equipped
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Drum machine hit's at intro don't sound good. Bass is sick at first but get's flat fast. Nice synth. Don't know what to add on the bass sound still trying to figure that one out meself. Thought the bass was perfect for certian thing's but the way you carried it throught the track, it just doesn't seem to have the same effect that it should. A combo of that and another bass would be sick. So im not saying drop it. Nice tuner!
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30-08-2005 18:59 |
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Muad'Dib
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Wow, kool begining... nice sounds... and those metallic drums...
u use some lame effects though... I guess you took them frm the SciFi_FX packs...
the break in the drop has amazing drums... the kick is just as I like it.
But that BASS disturbes the whole position - make some melody and not just one note... its too loud when it's prolonged like this. Suggestion: make it start another note when the kick hits!
Nice drums, though getting a bit boring now... ok, here is the pause comin...
the electric distorted reece sound sounds kinda dry.. too dry for my taste.
ok, no real buildup here, just like with the first part of the break..
the end is not as I expected, but you said that you will make a decent one, so let's hear it!
Too boring for my taste, sorry...
5/10
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30-08-2005 20:04 |
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short-wave
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i feel all strange as i listen to this track. it is a cool idea. the drums over power everything. the reece is way to choppy for way to long. it seems like you have a lot of cool ideas in this tune, just not all worked out yet to their best. most of the time i was waiting for you to twist the pitch of the drums up to help put "pop" at the end of a 16 bar. the drums sound mech. not enuff human feel for my taste. try running a matrix pattern, or a lfo assigned to the pitch or velocity of the high hats. do a simple pattern, like a bow tie etc...you can assign the same mod to many effects etc... the feel is consistent when other elements share something like a mod or efx. the bassline needs to do something else. learn what a arpeggiator is and use it. read computer music mag too! it helped me with music theroy. the kick seemed a bit obvious 808 sounding. and the other sounds i have heard before as well. twist some knobs, get crazy. automate! peace
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30-08-2005 23:54 |
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anf0 D
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lucky for me ive got you guys to point things out...
ok so...
i gotta... tweak my bass abit, maybe add another one to change it up, add some more low end maybe to the whole mix. or bass n synth.
and gotta take out my shitty drum machine cymbals at the intro... was abit lazy aye.
the bassline does have a little riff when the synth comes in... but yeah, i think i might change the first riff to give it abit of a nice groove.
no i didnt use any scifi fx packs, dont have any that i know of. its just lil cuts of samples with a dely. i like sci fi style.
and i like my drums so im not changing them, i might add some more variation though.
thanx guys
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31-08-2005 00:57 |
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i wouldnt say you have to remove your drum machine cymbals.....i personally would try and make them more interesting.....try dropping their levels in the mix and try them out with different reverbs, at the same time try automating the panning on them so they "swish" from right to left (or left to right) and alternate the panning....try and keep it lively....its the simple stuff which will keep it rolling.
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31-08-2005 01:22 |
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optikal_assassin
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Sorry man for not hittin ya up sooner on this joint, just been pretty busy lately. it's got the trademark anfo sound man, dark and sinister, but you know i gotta say man, you got the structure, now just fine tune it and i think it'd be a stormer. breaks sound fine to me, i'd say keep 'em. just as you said man, make them a bit busier. just make that shit swing. cymbals aren't bad choice but maybe eq'ing them a bit and adding some reverb to them. like a high end reverb to give them a little more breath of life. yeah, gotta work on that low end bit some more tho, i got the bass trying to push but its not hitting right. the bassline riff, not bad as you said, just add some swing on it so i dont sound like one tone all the way through, maybe trying some pitch sliding up and down to give it a bit mor eimpact in some spots. like a rollercoaster man, up and down makes for a wild time. definitely not bad shit tho for a few hours worth of work. i think i'd hate to hear what i roll out in just a few hours if i were to try that. i think you know where you're going with it better than anyone, so do it to it and bring it back.
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31-08-2005 06:57 |
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anf0 D
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31-08-2005 10:17 |
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cynik
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lol, dig the beginning - crash! intro is as expected twisted and mental
then the tune starts. yeah the bass could use a bit of makeup, if you want it to go that long use a phaser or plain filtering to occasionally twist it out, just boring this way. ok it gets a bit modulated afterwards.. you can do more
beats ere good apart from the already mentioned ride issue, I think it sounds good, it jus has to be put down a bit
all in all a cool dark twisted track with a few stuff to work more on
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31-08-2005 18:46 |
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Greyone
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Nice synth thing ... cymbas were a bit too loud.
Drop is heavy and has a dark neurofuck sciencefiction style
Drums are Amazingly TIGHT man .
Nice grimey basses , levels could be corrected a bit (cymbals , and high stuff)
. ..Realy psy-stuff , not much vocals this time is allright.
I'm allso really thinking about a collaboration.
See ya
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