dubcupboard - Poor Man's Blood (50%)done |
dubcupboard
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Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Poor Man's Blood (50%)done' and post your comments here!!!
A little Dubstep number been working on,
ingredients - cubase, recycle, akai sampler, and cd recorder.
enjoy!
__ dubcupboard
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27-08-2005 16:24 |
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Surya
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Drums are a bit low-key, but not bad.
Bassline isn't anything new, but not bad.
Your synthmelody sounded out of place to me though...
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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29-08-2005 10:38 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Like the intro, the congo pattern is kinda repetitive, if you broke it up a little more with some lower keyed congos that would help alot. or even toms! The synth on the drop is good. I like the breakdown with the lower synth 2:55 and was hoping it would go on for a wile longer at least 8 bars.
Over all I enjoyed listening. 9/10* Z
__ Nick & Erina Z
http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493

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29-08-2005 11:04 |
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dubcupboard
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Cheers for your ears!!
Dubs......
By the way I wasn't trying anything new regarding the bassline
'Juss makin' the kinna DnB I Love
Each to his own eh?
The track title incidently relates to that dreaded subject 'WAR'
Was gonna put the first half of the 'hooks' lyrical content in their but it didn't fit
The original lyric was : 'Rich mans war - Poor mans blood' ...
Anyway
Till next time!
Later.
__ dubcupboard
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06-09-2005 02:16 |
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Invent
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Registration Date: 03-09-2005
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i think the start is pretty good, i enjoy your slow but effective build up. however the melody that kicks in at some point is really cheezy the synth... kinda wierd.. lol
about half way in the track... however... once the drums and bass really kicks in i kinda like it... it has something quite interesting too it... even tho the bassline ofcourse isnt too different...
the further i get into the track the more i dislike the synth melody... maybe some more cool effects in between the drums would be nice...
overall not bad
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06-09-2005 12:47 |
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