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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Alien Aproaching' and post your comments here!!!
I'm done with experimenting .
...Hardstep !
EQing could be better i kno , but at least im back on track.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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26-08-2005 15:11 |
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this intro is dark (love it) oh my god that bit that cuts in at 1.57 nice,
beats realy sound good nice work on this one got loads of nice changes 
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Punch Bass ......
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26-08-2005 19:25 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by cynik
1/ the first drop kinda slams too sudden, the buildup is good but maybe give a sound to connect with the drop itself..
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also dont be a lazy ass and just fade it in; filter it in - way better and more powerful
3/and where's that mighty bass from the first drop later on? was kinda cool
4/your addiction for chopping up drums well established here 
5/levels are off but you already know that, bass overpowers. beats could punch more too
6/some cool madness going on here, Id like to hear the final version
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1/ 1st drop too sudden ?! I think 1:46 is long enough... . Sound to connect ? what do you mean?
2/it was filterd ( bandpassed i guess to give drop more powr) + fade in
3/mighty bass has got his time , i didn want to repeat it again as for the repetitiveness.
4/It's an adiction yes...
5/EQ still sucks because my amplitude over my speakers is badly divided :
-1 litle computer speaker (standart)
-1 atached big phat speaker who normaly needs some amplifier.
and because i changed my bass sounds and had to EQ it all again.
6/No final version
-too lazy
- hunger for new tracks
-this track sucks
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27-08-2005 10:39 |
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optikal_assassin
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there ya go man, back on track and swingin full force. i'd have to say i like it better when you get back up on track.
yeah, beats need a bit more slam to them, not too bad the way they are tho. Yeah, agreein' a tad with what cynik was sayin' about that bassline you faded in around 3:06. it didn't quite have as much impact as the first one you used. It seemed like at certain points throughout the track, the bass just disappeared tho. i think you should've dropped some deadlier subs tho. way more impact if you would have. breaks were cut nicely too. i liked alot of the sounds you used too. not sure i would say the alien approaching sample was the greatest, maybe it would have been cool as shit to do some pitch sliding on that for a little mor eof an out of this world feel. but still, nice improvement on this track man. has alot of potential. respecks to you my man.
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27-08-2005 10:45 |
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Surya
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Intro is nice n dark 
Some lovely FX in there
Drums are nice but could be a bit more up front imo.
Quite nice how you build up to the drop. The drop itself could have more impact though. I think it's the lack of low-end on your bass that fucks up the impact.
Some of the pads and stuff you use in addition to the bass are out of key.
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27-08-2005 10:48 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by Surya
Intro is nice n dark
Some lovely FX in there
Drums are nice but could be a bit more up front imo.
Quite nice how you build up to the drop. The drop itself could have more impact though. I think it's the lack of low-end on your bass that fucks up the impact.
Some of the pads and stuff you use in addition to the bass are out of key. |
intro drums where uncompressed and do have less impact than drop drums.
Impact isnt punchy enoug because of :
-Too much compression
-bass and EQ probs
I always been a sucker in ambient pads and stuff
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27-08-2005 10:57 |
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optikal_assassin
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Originally posted by greyone
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Originally posted by Surya
Intro is nice n dark
Some lovely FX in there
Drums are nice but could be a bit more up front imo.
Quite nice how you build up to the drop. The drop itself could have more impact though. I think it's the lack of low-end on your bass that fucks up the impact.
Some of the pads and stuff you use in addition to the bass are out of key. |
intro drums where uncompressed and do have less impact than drop drums.
Impact isnt punchy enoug because of :
-Too much compression
-bass and EQ probs
I always been a sucker in ambient pads and stuff
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its all good man, now next time, to make up for it, you gotta bring that shit harder...
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27-08-2005 10:59 |
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Greyone
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Im bussy with a next track
Much more pounding like pendulum stuff .
dunno if i make it techstep or hardstep again...
anyway thanx for reviewing
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27-08-2005 11:02 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by greyone
1/ 1st drop too sudden ?! I think 1:46 is long enough... . Sound to connect ? what do you mean? |
the buildup was good, nice intro and slowly I could feel something mean was about to happen
at some point I dont know why but it felt kinda empty until it all together slammed in, which was cool but.. a sound to connect like a vocal thing or whatnot to fill the emptiness
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Originally posted by greyone
2/it was filterd ( bandpassed i guess to give drop more powr) + fade in |
well I disliked the sound you chose.. didn't fit in. if it was badpassed it was not enough or not in agood way.. or the fade-in was more obvious
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6/No final version
-too lazy
- hunger for new tracks
-this track sucks |
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27-08-2005 11:13 |
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anf0 D
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this one is nice, but not one of my favs from you.
the intro sounds are nice, and i think the beat comes in alright...
the build to the first drop is nice although i dont think it does impact as hard as it could, sounds abit messy.
the beats are nice. nice little edits and change ups
the basslines are alright, im not down with a few of them, but thats my taste in basslines.
nice arrangment... the bassline u first drop needs more power! because it ruins the drop. sounds like pez low end. because the other comes in slamin.
just a lil bit of eq work neeeded. the vocals are cool.
keep it up mate.
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29-08-2005 01:02 |
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Greyone
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thanx , now i'll first do bass & kick , if this puches enough then i'll continue .
Else i got to much bass EQ problems.
See ya later
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29-08-2005 11:28 |
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