vel 
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Please check out my new track 'Childs Play' and post your comments here!!!
Started this track some time ago, a little diffrent to what i normaly come up with, i no some things need doing to this but just want to no what you think needs doing (hope you enjoy).
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26-08-2005 02:23 |
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Surya
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Intro isn't very imaginative. And a bit too repetetive.
Kinda cool how you build up to the drop
The leadsound sounds a bit dry, give it a bit of reverb.
Drop: sounds very compressed, give your drums a bit more punch and your bass could be tighter. Quite nice drive though.
That stuff from the intro starts getting on my nerves a bit though...
Quite a lot of the same stuff the whole time throughout the whole track. Becomes a bit boring.
Quite good production, but not that intresting imo.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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26-08-2005 11:18 |
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vel
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That stuff from the intro starts getting on my nerves a bit though... |
hahahaha it does, i no what you mean surya.
thanks for the review
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26-08-2005 11:24 |
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optikal_assassin
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damn bro, ill tell ya what, with some serious fine tuning this shit could be a possible floor rocker. squelchy synth, irritating as hell man, sounds out of place to the rest of the tune. i'd say ditch that or maybe tone it down more. more variety too man. not a whole lot going on other than the same synth melody for the most part. i'd say maybe make that bassline more raw. i think the biggest problem is the lack of anything new coming up. breaks are pretty good too man, makes this shit drive right along. i think this one's got some serious potential, just think about what ya can do with this before you decide to scrap it man, just think. 
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26-08-2005 13:47 |
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vel
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Thanks for the review. This tune isnt even nearly finished yet, I did this ages ago (1year) and only just found it again, so thought I'd see what you all thought.... The repetative melody gets right on my girlfriends tits..... ha ha ha
But i hope to finish this soon, so I can wind her up a bit more ......
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26-08-2005 14:15 |
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Greyone
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filter the high end in the intro and build up nicely imo.
strange intro anyway 
, reminds me of some new UK dnb jumpup.
I thing you should pitchshift that high sound sometimes , to create multiple impacts.
Compression is right.
Learn to work more with FX : melo's that roll in and sound pitching/distorting/messing up.... and stuff.
This track got potential but has to variate more in the way of ...tone.
For the rest its a nice production Vel. 
ps: outro's good
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26-08-2005 14:16 |
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vel
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Originally posted by greyone
reminds me of some new UK dnb jumpup. |
hahahaha may be thats cause im from the uk
Thanks for the review.
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26-08-2005 14:26 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by greyone
reminds me of some new UK dnb jumpup. |
hahahaha may be thats cause im from the uk
Thanks for the review. |
ah , but don't stick too much on that high synth/bass always , unless it's your style .
But nowadays every UK dnb beat sounds like that , like they make it a contest for the highest reece.
Create your own style
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26-08-2005 14:30 |
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vel
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Thanks for the tip Greyone but this aint my usual style at all, I did this ages ago (1 year) and only just comne across it again.... I never got to finish it off, I was in a different mood at the time, wanting to try something a little different for myself
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26-08-2005 14:34 |
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anf0 D
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Originally posted by optikassassin
damn bro, ill tell ya what, with some serious fine tuning this shit could be a possible floor rocker. |
word...
first thing i thought when it started was... man did a kid really make this... but then it changes up and u can tell its gonna be some sort of twisted cool fun.
i really like the way it built up to the drop. bass is phat. and drums are nice too.
the synths are fukd up in a good way. love the weird ass reece. and the other synth is cool.
fine tune it. tis really cool in your own special way.
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