 Hi im nu! heres my new tune - caged - oldskool sounding calibre-esque stylee!!! |
EazyBoy
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Registration Date: 25-08-2005
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Hi im a noob 2 this forum but hopefull you can tell ive been producing for a few years? ; )
Aparrent 'harsh but helpful' feedback 
- ill add now then that you may need to listen on a system where the bass can heard.
hope you like 
link:
http://www.acidplanet.com/components/emb...D=617738&T=5542
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25-08-2005 00:24 |
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optikal_assassin 
|da jungle snipa|
Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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hey man, welcome aboard....track is nice man. didn't make too much impact for me tho. i'm sure by the style of the track you weren't looking to make something that blew your ears out. the style of the track is pretty smooth, basslines are ok, could have been a bit deeprer, but thats a personal taste tho. kinda sucks this embedded AP media player don't have an EQ on it tho, kinda makes it hard to get a good feel for the groove kinda. i think it sounded kinda plain and repetitive to be honest. i think it needed more changeups along the way to keep someone sitting and listening for the whole 7:15. i can tell you know what your doin' tho and its not to bag on ya music, just sayin', it needed to be a bit more busier, new sounds along the way. from what i can tell tho EQ'ing sounds alright. not sure how much more in depth i can get man other than the essential changeups and filling it out a bit more so it doesn't sound repititious. other people may think otherwise and think its fine, this is just my two cents. good track tho overall... 
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25-08-2005 00:43 |
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Darkside
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Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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welcome to drum n bass.be!
absolutely lush intro. what's your setup?
when the lil fx-like shakers come in off beat they sound too much like the normal shakers, and it kinda messes up the flow. put some different effects on those. pan them, maybe.
pretty, but the intro is effin long.
usin samples from versionist (i think) ...didnt really like those but thats just me.
whoa, beat needs a lot more energy even though this tune is light. could be a lot more punchy is the main thing, and you need some hi hats in there, or at least something like them, because the shaker has too much attack, as shakers do, and it doesnt drive very well.
after the next drop i notice that this is really just the same thing over and over isnt it? really minimal tune dude, even for chill.
you could definitely take this to the level of a sweet tune but it just needs more...its very repetitive and the drums are weak right now. dont really like the vocal either. synths and everything are fantastic and bass is fine to me. just work on the issues i mentioned, k?
7/10
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25-08-2005 02:07 |
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EazyBoy
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Registration Date: 25-08-2005
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Thaks guys. Im only using my laptop and fruity loops lol. Nothing else. The samples ive used have all been collected from various packs etc over the years and proceessed and layered in fruity.
I know theres loads to be done. But ive only been working on the track for two days.... shouldve posted it as a preview really.
Is the intro really that long? doesnt seem no longer than most dnb? I will add more to it to make it seem less repetative, but i dont want to to add to much because simple is the feel im goin for. The main part of the track should hopefully have changed significantly next time i post this up. The drums i will beef up along with the bass. Im definately gonna add more variation.
Thanks again
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25-08-2005 14:25 |
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