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S.O.T.A. 
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Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'crypt keeper 50%' and post your comments here!!!
this one is for passda j cause he didn't like the trance in the last one.
Sorry this is the last time I'm going to do a preview
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24-08-2005 04:10 |
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optikal_assassin
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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yo, intro sounds pretty sick. i like the "pow!" soundin' sample, not sure tho, is that just a dope ass snare or is it some kinda other sample? either way, i like it. sounds like the one snare you used during the break in the start was too low in volume tho. the metallic sounding one. 1:39, shit gets crazy now. i like the drop man, i just think some of the synths you used were a bit too dry, maybe some subtle reverb and delay to fill 'em out more would give it a fuller sound. breaks need some more impact after the drop too. touchin' pretty deep on them basslines so shit gets kinda lost in them. i like this alot soo far man, i just think some better toning on some things would work nicely. 
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24-08-2005 04:36 |
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equipped
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24-08-2005 07:54 |
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Surya
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The FX are kinda cool in the intro, but the main leadsound there is kinda annoying imo.
Drums are pretty much in the background.
Ah, more up front drums coming in. Better 
Drop: Drums stil lacking a bit of power, give them more punch. Bassline is pretty nice though. Some nice switches. The sound from the intro is really starting to annoy me by now, you should get rid of it somewhere
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-08-2005 10:22 |
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vel
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i think you gotta make the beats stand out a lil more on this tune like layer anouther kick and snare but not sure because ive gotta listen with my head phones and i also found the synth sound from the intro carries on a bit to long apart from that the track is ok
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Punch Bass ......
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24-08-2005 23:25 |
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Darkside
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synth in the intro is kinda annoying like surya said.
some of the sounds are really dry sounding, doesnt really paint a smooth flowing atmosphere together at all.
the pow sound like a gunshot IS cool.
wow the drums are kinda way down there, bring em up..
as usual the bassline is crazy.
this tune is ok i guess, you're definitely getting better at production but there are issues...
6/10
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25-08-2005 02:13 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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Errooor again , wtf is this ?
Everytime I download a SOTA track it stucks on an error message?
...And it's only with your tracks .
Anybody knows why ?
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25-08-2005 17:01 |
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S.O.T.A.
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25-08-2005 19:37 |
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zebediah
is deep in the jungle
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This intro would be fun in the mix! That synth is pretty neat with the portamento, maybe if it changed one note here and there or something. I think it's got potential. I feel it needs to stop when the bassline drops tho and possibly come in over the beat again later near the second breakdown.
This song is sprinkled with goodies! I love the crashes, the rides, the stabs, the weird hits ... it's got alot of personality. Your stuff doesn't have that dry lo fi sound that I hear come out of Reason so many times.
As for the drums, like what was said before they need to be a bit punchier and in your face.
The bassline is my favorite part about this tune!
I realise the track is not finished but it's sounding really f*ckin good! Finish it damnit! No more previews!
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25-08-2005 20:48 |
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BigFire
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hmm like it dont have any kinda sub stuff hooked in right now so can really tell on the bass. Songs missing some 250-1000 freq and there a big spike at 2000-5000. not shure which noise is doing that. Sounds good. but seems unbalanced. thats is its that synth doing that spike. Maybe dither or just tunr it down a little? This song is sprikled with goodies. never think of doing that too much personally. One of my faults.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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27-08-2005 02:58 |
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Srblack
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Registration Date: 27-02-2008
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27-02-2008 19:29 |
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Did you pull that off? If so that's some insainly good distorting. Maybe layer your stabby hit's with a bomb bass. Synth's that come in at >1:16 need more crunch imo. Some more filtering would certianly do the trick. Amen's at >2:12 for example, sound a bit weak in the mix, some layering should fill thing's up. Phat preview indeed! Diggin the way you've managed to create such a complex stabby track, maintaining thing's on an edge all the way through which is not easy to do. Cheers. 
