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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
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22-08-2005 21:36 |
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Like the intro! Crazy sound at>0:22. Vocal's are nicley mashed. Bass is phat but drop has no impact. Some funky shit at>3:18, dig that! Maybe try and wobble the bass, I feel it would work well with this track. Check >2:30 this is where I got the idea, almost sound's like a wobble. 
Diggin >3:40, some mad ass sound's goin down! 3:40>could be longer imo. Kick's could be layered. Nice work D-Pitch. 
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23-08-2005 00:01 |
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Friscko
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23-08-2005 00:36 |
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Greyone
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She looks familiar , isn't she ...
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23-08-2005 00:39 |
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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
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No ur, mistaken it my mother and i thought the pic captures her good side..
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23-08-2005 00:43 |
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Greyone
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No ur, mistaken it my mother and i thought the pic captures her good side.. |
yeh , life can be harsh...
review later D-Pitch , to tired now.
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23-08-2005 00:45 |
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Both the melody and the vocal started to irritate my quite fast, I'm sorry to say...
The reece sounds very digital, don't really like that. I prefer analogue and dirty sound 
Drums are quite nice, but they lack punch. The whole track lacks punch and bass in fact, it's all mid and high-end, so the mixdown got fucked up somewhere I guess...
Drop has no impact indeed, probably due to the fucked up mixdown...
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23-08-2005 15:30 |
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Greyone
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intro :
beasts hustling around ... special intro ...trancy. Nice FXwork , not fond of the kick (tweak the mid freq. ) , still intro 
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no impact , its like no drop...
boost the sub up and the mid bass. , FX are good indeed , ah finaly some dropping. Sounds a bit repetitive after a while , I think if you would compress the whole , it would sound a lot better.
Outro : fading out ?
Track has some good elements but lacks some more punch in the face you know...
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23-08-2005 21:22 |
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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
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Thx ppl i gona look into this a bit more . i feel i have a problem with mastering and eq . dont know if its my speakers or me.
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24-08-2005 02:44 |
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Halph-Price
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get decnet headphones, i suggest sony's STUDIO MONITOR types, MDR-V500 or whatevers...
even the lowest model is great quality, above that of the mere pc speaker.
the digital sound can eve have a gritty analouge sound... it's not easy.
eq it afte you degrade..
okay, sweet swing in the center there. that was nicly redeeming.
oh and voxengo has a FREE vst called SPAN, it shows break down of the entire spectrum, and than even with whatever speakers it'll hel p you see levels better.
the vocal's are deffiantly not loud enough, need to fiddle with that some how... compressor, or saturat, or even just eq the mid part of it, from 2-5khz generally. some where to give it a boost, probably 2-3kz
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 25-08-2005 06:02.
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25-08-2005 05:57 |
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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
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i have a set of sennheiser eh2200 earphones that are good.
i heard somewere that once the eq was ok that to get levels right ppl use earphone set to aquiet volume, i mastered this track on studiophile bx8s on high volume. this could be were ive gone wrong.
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25-08-2005 16:59 |
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I liked the intro, but was expecting a little more from it. You could of turned the drums up, and changed up the EQ so its a litle more bassey. Add some synth, and turn the songs volume up. I like the bass melody, but try to make it a little more dark next track. Just in my point of view. Try to make the body of the song more beefy.
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