 DJ Hybrid K - motion blur (preview(still in the making)) |
DJ Hybrid K 
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Registration Date: 06-02-2005
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Please check out my new track 'motion blur (preview(still in the making))' and post your comments here!!!
this is the idea so far but im saving up for albino so once i get that i'll remake the track.
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PEACE
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21-08-2005 19:47 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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FX in the intro are sweet
Synth coming in: some too deep, too loud subs here and there. It sounds a bit dry too, give it a slight bit of reverb.
Drums coming in: they're overpowering synth a bit.
The melodies aren't great though, they're boring very fast.
2.56 and further: those kicks are way too loud!
The whole thing is overcompressed a bit, you can clearly hear the increase in volume in the end...
Sorry, but there's very little positive to say about this tune...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-08-2005 09:43 |
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Politix
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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the amabiance works, but i don;t like the white noise in the background. Make that bass bigger! The drums r cool but the snare is a bit mettalic(for my taste!). The second theme is sweet. Nice bassline and nice drums, don't like the synths much tho, either use them with conviction or not at all imo. they are better alone tho. if tou spice up the first bass it could be real nice. On the sound front, the quality isn't great but the ideas are nice. keep it up!
thanks for the listen
Politix
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22-08-2005 19:17 |
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Infusion
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Registration Date: 10-04-2005
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Hi,
I´m from Austria and this is my 1st review, my english isn´t very good so some expressions may seem "strange" ^^
I definetely like the industrial intro. That Bass that comes up at about 0:30 is imho to "soft" -> maybe ad a distorted rough "high-frequency" sound to the bass.
The Beat is nice - like those rides 
The 1st snare is too thin, needs more "body" (cant express that better in english). The Parts where the bass is the only sound are a little bit boring - some filter-action would be nice ^^
You really should work on that bass, that chorus-type fx on it sounds not so good -> I guess the bass is a soft-synth -> I personaly use for bass samples (mostly).
There are not many of these litlle drumbreakz, the few i´ve heard are cool -> more of it.
You have potential, looking forward to hear the finished version
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25-08-2005 21:31 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Registration Date: 21-06-2005
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REVIEW Disclaimer: I have not released a drum´n Bass song here yet. So do I really know what I am talking about? That remains to be seen.
.... Not a bad effort at all
Actually, once for a while, someone makes 3 minutes long DnB song. Dunno if this is because youre only half-way (literally) but for my attention-span has degraded into 2minutes 14 seconds afterlistening too much current pop music, I am not able to feel myself bored, atleast too many times
(yes, feel free to make dance-floor edit too) Actually, with second listen, your tune is nothing but a good intro, please add about 2 minutes of head banging action.
Sound-wise you have some polishing to do, and your breaks are repeating themselves a slightly, but this tune has a structure, idea and even some melody, big up for that
Intro is exiting, has strong feeling to it and urges to listen more. when first bass notes come, I love the empty moment right after bass attack. I think youre lacking some bell-ringing from 12-14kHz ísh, your plates are a bit dark.
If possible, try to bring your bass some more dynamics (that is, hard attack, quicker release so it pumps under beats and thus graps more attention.
Boost kickdrum from 100-110Hz for about 6dB to bring it up.
Introduce moments (for example 1 bar long) where there are no other sound that reverb tails and other sounds coming a way. Make them sudden. Those will increase the energy a lot.
youre heading right direction, but got second half of the song and mixing to be done, 6/10
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