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cynik 
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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Please check out my new track 'grey lines' and post your comments here!!!
been a while since I posted, here's what I've come up with recently..
another not exactly finished, I am yet to beefen things up, maybe change some, so I need some reccomendations from you guys..
so tell me what you think should be done, like / dislike etc..
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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21-08-2005 17:18 |
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Surya
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Intro is ok
Drums need a boost, they don't have any impact now.
Liking the metalic snare that comes in with the drop... hmmm, fake drop?
Drop: nice neurofunky dark stuff. Too bad it gets dropped that fast.
Lacking bass. Ah, there is a sub here and there, but you can't hear it. Give it a boost.
The downtempo part isn't bad, but it has become a cliché, and I'm bored with it.
Some very nice ideas, but the execution needs a lot of work, the track isn't very exciting yet...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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21-08-2005 18:08 |
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cynik
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thanks for the review surya, will keep in mind what you said
there was one star without any review before suryas rate.. whoever you are get a life you bitch
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21-08-2005 18:18 |
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joshmccann
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Drumline is good but seems lacking in soething. Pads are nice and dark. After the drop it doesn't ever seem to build up though. Just seems to kind of float throught the rest of the track. No real movement.
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21-08-2005 19:20 |
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S.O.T.A.
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What's up man? Thia track makes me think of tee bee. I like the intro it's sinister. The drums are cool. Neat break. Sounds good there is that one hat in there that's bothering me it's too loud or maybe a different one? It would make a good intro track. It's chill but still dark tones to it. I enjoyed listening to it.
COOL LATER 
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22-08-2005 03:09 |
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optikal_assassin
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sup man, nice intro. nothing overly exciting but it sounded good still. im not sur eim a big fan of that metallic snare tho. kinda feels outta place with the rest of the mix. i think the overall sound could've been crunched a bit to give it more feel. maybe some maximizing and more sound to fill it out a bit more around the edges. everything sounded kinda thin to me, know what im sayin? really could have used more of a heavier bassline with better bottom tho too. the track just almost seemed kinda dry with the bass levels you used. give it a nice push to make more impact. synths were a nice touch. kinda agree with what joshmccann said tho, after the drop, the rest of the track just hung there not really goin' anywhere. maybe hyping things up a bit more as it went along. i dunno man, it was a good track, just think it could have had a better hype factor. something dark like this calls for some hard shit.
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22-08-2005 03:50 |
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anf0 D
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yeah the intro sounds are nice and t he synths are cool, i like the sound of them. the drums are alright although do need a boost... and the sub needs to have some mega power pumping through.
arrangment is alright... long breaks. i dislike long breaks, that arnt very xciting. and the drop doesnt impact as much as it should... missing some loud drums n bass. the synths seem to sound louder then the drums n bass. the reece is nice... the wobbles are cool.
keep working it fo sure.
7/10
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22-08-2005 06:14 |
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Greyone
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I'm yealous for such an intro , drums could be a bit louder ,
drop ... no ?! it's bit strange here --> make a buildup so the listener knows when to start jumpin' around.
Tons of sounds n fx , like it ...
Sub could use a boost.
buildups could be much better !
drums are missing ghostsnares ... or no there are ... but boost them.
tracks a bit too long to imo , 6min would be enough.
Nice neurofunk cynik , althoug the drums n the buildups could have more attention on them.
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22-08-2005 09:41 |
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cynik
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thanks all for the time and ears, Im gonna take some of oyur advices, cause I really feel this tune, maybe make it more disorted and work on the eqing of the channels - cause theres none. as you all said bass is lacking
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23-08-2005 13:15 |
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