Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Ionic' and post your comments here!!!
Ok...before anyone comments on sounds and mixdowns... Ive been working on this "idea" for like...3 total hours...and doesnt have shiiiiit done to it...
BUT ANYWAY...
This is my take a somewhat feel of a danny c, metalheadz feel for a track... Its not totally chaotic like most danny c tracks...but i deffinitely feel it fits the MetalHeadz profile which is ironic cause i hate the fucking labels music...(they put out so much shit, and so little fucking amazing work)
Thats neither here nor there... I Just wanted some comments and ideas to i can finish this one...it needs to be finished by the 2nd as well...
Will give details on Production vst's and what not that i usd in the final version...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-08-2005 05:59 |
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Surya
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Nice drive on yer beats
Stabs are fine, they sound nice, nice reverb
Bassline coming in: I like that bassline, but it has been used so many times before.
Nice switches on them beats
Nice buildup to the drop
Drop: Nice stuff, quite some power, but the sound is cruched, maybe even clipped. Your levels and EQing need some work. Some basslines are a little too loud, others are just plain too loud.
Lots of potential, fix that sound!!!
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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19-08-2005 10:33 |
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Darkside
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in the 90's, metalheadz put out the best. *sigh*
intro is ok. maybe a lil more ambient noise for us in that intro. i've got some absynth patches you may wanna consider.
i like the beat, the metallic sounding break that comes in to change up is nice.
bass is a true destroyer.
what i've been noticing on your tracks lately is the clipping between bass and beat, you really need to fix that. i know how mixdowns can be weird sometimes tho.
carries a nice beat tho.
i recall sayin u should drop the sci fi beeps out during the beat earlier, and make it just rhythm and less randomness. seems alright now tho.
pretty good track, finish this one man.
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19-08-2005 15:16 |
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Greyone
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is that the TRacker vst ?
Soundquality is good.
Tight drums man.
Is that 185 or 190 Bmp ?
Bass is awesome.
Aww. those basskicks overlap.
nice track man.
8/10
Just make it fully finished and it's a killer track.
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19-08-2005 18:51 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by greyone
is that the TRacker vst ?
Soundquality is good.
Tight drums man.
Is that 185 or 190 Bmp ?
Bass is awesome.
Aww. those basskicks overlap.
nice track man.
8/10
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LOL its at 178
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19-08-2005 20:07 |
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Paki
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Intro seems to be Ok. Very electronic.....
Interesting stabs ....
Like the reveerb....
Awesome drums ....
Like the snares and kicks used in it...
Nice overload distorsion on baseline....
The pad in the break is also ok....
The tune is rolling ....
Didn`t liked those vocals.....
An advise... make the baseline more melodic....
Too distorteddddd!!!!.......
The outro comes suddenly....
Overall good track....
Rating9.5 
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20-08-2005 22:52 |
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Formula
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Mayb a longer intro?
for the rest: 
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21-08-2005 03:07 |
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Darkside
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SURORA HAS 5 STARS?
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21-08-2005 03:18 |
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Surora23
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AHAHAHAHAHASHA OMG! i think thast a first...LOL how can a preview that sounds liek shit even get 5 stars...thats too funny...
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21-08-2005 05:03 |
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Surya
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Yeah, some user made 10 accounts and systematically rated down a few users' tracks...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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21-08-2005 14:09 |
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Muad'Dib
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Ok, lets review..
strange intro, electronic.. juz like some techno electronica... frm the 80s...
its very strange that the snares are in stereo, like u used that trick...
The metallic snare is too loud, lower it down... nice breaks, the bass is nice, but it lacks high frequencies... that noise is needed here, but I guess u dumped it in the FX process...
The pause comes to abruptly and too soon... nice sounds, u keep the atmo...
the build up sux, juz a 1 sound?! 
No offence, but this should be fixed imm. Your breaks are great. So you lowered the snare now.. or bad mastering?
YEah, I know....
nice idea, though it's juz like any other dnb track... try adding a lead line here or there, that should fix the atmo... and its too slow...
Sorry, don't dig this one...
4/10
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21-08-2005 17:44 |
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Halph-Price
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you really gotta start working with actual drum loops, it takes away from the drum machine sound. if you go with the same kick and snare it sounds bad.
the snare would be a good one to layer on said drumloops.
i dunno. or maybe some proper eq.
the bassline is great. you finally got them down pack.
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21-08-2005 20:37 |
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BigFire
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Originally posted by Surora23
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AHAHAHAHAHASHA OMG! i think thast a first...LOL how can a preview that sounds liek shit even get 5 stars...thats too funny... |
This irks me I mean this song is good but 5 stars? maybe 2
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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21-08-2005 21:04 |
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prb2k
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Great track so far imo
As much as a try to, i can't really find anything to criticize about it, lol! The arrangement is cool, slowly building and dropping in all the right places. And the mixing is quite tight, everything sounds warm and punchy the way DnB should be...
The bass sound(s) are nice but prolly need just a bit of tweaking eq/level wise but otherwise its sounding very promising indeed.
Just one quick question, how do get those 'crunchy' sub sounds? Can somebody point me in the right direction here?
And gl with the rest of the track, m8 
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21-08-2005 22:18 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by prb2k
Great track so far imo
As much as a try to, i can't really find anything to criticize about it, lol! The arrangement is cool, slowly building and dropping in all the right places. And the mixing is quite tight, everything sounds warm and punchy the way DnB should be...
The bass sound(s) are nice but prolly need just a bit of tweaking eq/level wise but otherwise its sounding very promising indeed.
Just one quick question, how do get those 'crunchy' sub sounds? Can somebody point me in the right direction here?
And gl with the rest of the track, m8
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the sub sounds are a tc sample and a 60hz sub samples withh a pogo effect so it addes more attack giving it a shit load of punch...
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22-08-2005 01:39 |
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prb2k
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Excuse my ignorance, but what does 'tc' mean? :S
Sorry, i won't interupt the thread with any more questions after this, lol...
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22-08-2005 02:48 |
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optikal_assassin
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sounds to me like it'd be some rough shit after you finished it out. not sur eim feelin' that intro too much tho. it just seemed to bland, not much of anything going on to keep me ready for the drop. maybe more sick ass pads ran through that shit might breathe some new life into it. break work is pretty tight. bassline tho, not sure i like it for this track. dont sound bad tho, just seems once shit dropped, everything started clashing a little too much. just for me personally i think before things just kick off on the drop, maybe trying to build a little more anticipation. as far as the rest of the track tho, im not really sure right offhand what would make this track a bomb. i know man, alot of fuckin' help i am huh? but sounds like some good shit tho soo far, just fill it out more with some new twists and change the intro up a bit to make it sound a lil more hype.
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